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Pariah 02-08-04 08:54 AM

B.mouse v Rappin' master
 
I cant officially vote ( not enough posts) but here's what I thought:

Flow: Both did a pretty decent job. I'd have to say though, that
B. Mouse flowed a little better. He had good structure, which
helped his shit flow. Also had some multis. Rappin's verse
had alright flow, but I felt that the structure let him
down, cause' a few lines seemed stretched.

Punches/Personals: Rappin' had a few good punches, like the treadmill
line and the first class line, but the rest came
off too weak/played. B,mouse also didn't have that
great of punches. A few lines were played like the
Tyson line and the Terminator line but the first line
I liked. Neither had any personals. All in all
kinnda average for both, but I'd say Rappin'
edged him out slightly by being a bit more creative

Vocab/Creativity: Basic vocab on both parts, creatively speaking
Rappin' took it. Mouse's punches were a little simple
and a few lines were played. Rappin's lines
also seemed a little bland and played, but had a few
that stood out more than Mouse's.

Overall: Not a great battle, but decent. Both had good flow but battles
are won with punches. This is where I felt Rappin' did
slightly better, due to creativity. Both need to use personals
which were absent from this battle. Punches also need work
they were played and didn't hit that hard. Close one but
If I could vote I would have to say Rappin' Master
barely edged him out.

code-187 02-08-04 09:05 AM

close battle, wasnt very good but some of it made me laugh
b mouse had some funny shit and a good flow
r.m your flow was ok but ur punches were elementary( ull get better)
vote-r.m

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1166316

code-187 02-08-04 09:07 AM

sorry bout that
vote-b. mouse ( was what i meant)

Timeless 02-08-04 09:08 AM

aite his is how this happend,

rappin masta = good flow in your piece tho the structure waz a bit off, your punches hit hard in some places and ya vocab was ok.

b-mouse = flow was ok, punches didnt hit as hard as masta, vocab was ok.

flow = masta
vocab=b-mouse
punches=masta
vote = masta

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR SINCE I VOTED IN THIS BATTLE, THE LINK IS UNDER MY SIG. THANKS

Rappin' Master 02-08-04 12:18 PM

come on ppl. we need more votes....................

B,mouse 02-08-04 04:15 PM

3-2, uuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn

Rappin' Master 02-09-04 10:44 AM

the votes need to be on da poll dick..................

B,mouse 02-09-04 11:37 AM

fine then, 2-1 dick, this site is shit anyway, maybe i'll come back another time and rip everybody

mc attitude 02-09-04 01:41 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...602#post1169602 vote here please

Slug Diamonds 02-09-04 01:53 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113159

Aiight I peeped ya's, could you return the favor

Rappin' Master 05-02-04 12:28 PM

upp

E Looch 05-02-04 12:41 PM

B.mouse v Rappin' master

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I cant officially vote ( not enough posts) but here's what I thought:

Flow: Both did a pretty decent job. I'd have to say though, that
B. Mouse flowed a little better. He had good structure, which
helped his shit flow. Also had some multis. Rappin's verse
had alright flow, but I felt that the structure let him
down, cause' a few lines seemed stretched.

Punches/Personals: Rappin' had a few good punches, like the treadmill
line and the first class line, but the rest came
off too weak/played. B,mouse also didn't have that
great of punches. A few lines were played like the
Tyson line and the Terminator line but the first line
I liked. Neither had any personals. All in all
kinnda average for both, but I'd say Rappin'
edged him out slightly by being a bit more creative

Vocab/Creativity: Basic vocab on both parts, creatively speaking
Rappin' took it. Mouse's punches were a little simple
and a few lines were played. Rappin's lines
also seemed a little bland and played, but had a few
that stood out more than Mouse's.

Overall: Not a great battle, but decent. Both had good flow but battles
are won with punches. This is where I felt Rappin' did
slightly better, due to creativity. Both need to use personals
which were absent from this battle. Punches also need work
they were played and didn't hit that hard. Close one but
If I could vote I would have to say Rappin' Master
barely edged him out.

now thats a vote he hir every point that needed to be hit and i agree with him

lil jon 05-02-04 12:57 PM

erm.....mastre
v/master

ReLiC 05-02-04 01:53 PM

i think mouse got it with flow and metas

Mouse=5.5/10
rap=5/10

return favor plz in sig vote on #4

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

2Face 05-02-04 08:31 PM

ya'll was weak as hell a fuckn baby
wouldn't vote for this shit
got damn ya'll weak shit
bitches


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