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this guy has got like ten posts, is his judgement impared
tellin me hes battled before so i best get scared ehh..weak personal i cant believe i dropped to the level to battle GestofHonor my lyrics are unbielievable, im bout to leave ur head to ponder no punch..jus filler this stupid nigga sayin his hobbies are graffiti when hes really a good boy, at home eatin wheaties kinda weak...but ok maybe u should battle other niggas who are newbies this mother fucker postin battles cluelessly ok to battle me, this nigga must be token ill break u, like the rock would hulk hogan played...ok this nigga prolly gonna spit pointless lines preppy as bitch battlin in ur calvin clines decent punch if your gonna battle me, come prepared my last line will leave u blind, visually impared ok dis faggot fuck needs to find his flow and fast... Fuck it i'd have a better chance escaping from alkatraz.... weak punch...played too Nigga just cuz ur ass is pussy dont mean u'll ever get some... My lyricas are lethal and'll leave ur ass dead numb.... played....weak punch I got more guns den roses and i sure know how to use dem.... His ass is watchin 8mile for da 100th time tryin 2 be like eminem.... 1st line ok...second id played to hell I poke at his weak rhymes like a bum at a payphone pokin for quarters... Leave him for dead and find out if he lived by listenin to da fox 5 reporters... stretched a bit..ok punch How da fuck you gonna call my ass out den drop sum gay ass post all ur doin is wastin my time...dis bitch is still tryin to figure out wat he saw today on hiphops toughest rhymes.... whack....lines real stretched too Fuck dis doof i messed up by boning his moms dat was my only goof... If you dont belive me i can prove dis nigga is pussy cuz i got da PROOF.. played...ok personal How da fuk u gonna fuck wit GESTofHonor da one and only... Ill stab ur ass at the crossroads so u wont be lonely.... whack Proof takes this battle for more punches and less filler. Gest came with too many played sex/gay lines and filler. Most of Gest's punches were weak...had a few ok ones tho. Proof had some filler too but not as much...some decent punches. Vote goes to Proof Please drop an honest vote here guys. i took the time for you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337 |
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i think this was a pretty simple battle too, but proof had a nicer flow and his punches were more direct and hit a bit harder...i've see better i think from you man, work on some multi's and wordplay, maybe up the vocab......6/10
Gest-had some alright punches but all of them were one-liners, try to smooth out the syllable count to make flow easier and throw in and work on some multi's too, closer was kinda weak be a little more creative......5/10 it was close but i likes proof's flow and wordplay a bit better.. good job guys....keep at it.... return the favor..... vote-Proof |
uppin 4, dont waste ur time voting if u dont give adequate feedback, if you do though, drop a link
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This battle wa aight I suppose here is how I see it
flow/ I thought that PROOF has a nice flow going on with sum nice rhymes and a gud wordplay, I didn't felt that with gest punchlines: They both had sum gud punchlines but Proof did betta cuz his punches just came harder and Gest's were just played personals: I din't saw so much personals but Proof tried to post sum while gest didn't structure: They both had a gud structurer, nothin special but ok I think you both need to work on more personals cuz that is how you can win a battle v/PROOF Hit back on this thx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596 |
you have too many battles open proof.
Ur too white Be you banned okay.....................................? |
PROOF is DQed for having too many battles open at once.
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