^^ my mistake up there.. I fucked up and forgot to talk about his verse..this is the correction..

Shizzle
Dizzle
Good opener,Thats how the battle supposed to be opned.With a good solid opener
T-Westizzle
Is a faggizle
this was a great personal.it shows you did your research on this bar.Nice shit . made me laugh too
fo shizzle
mah nizzle
good filler, could have been better but it flowed well.
i took him out of retirementizzle
imma end dis shizzle
good closer and nice play on his sig. also good flow
da way i usally doizzle
against the sluts on da streetizzle
.................................................. ..slut
good closer, ended it like it was suppose to be ended.

obviously t-west was gunna win. Da other guy didnt even try to put up a fight. he had no rhyme, no flow, no structure and no punches. It was crap. T-west, it was good like your other battles. You had a nice flow with good wordplay and some nice punches.

vote T-west

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GestofHonor

You didn't drop anything.
Overall = 0
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T West
Can I get any bigger herb, is name is missin a "u"
Because there ain't no way that I'm losing you U!
personal,wordplay = 7
GESTofHonor, close to Metal of Honor, and you know wats fukked?
The fact that they both deal with soldiers...
....and that both of em suck!
personal,punch = 8
He said "finally you left this crappy crew!!!" to Dazasta
the way you make up so many lies...we could call ya mascara
personal,wordplay = 7
Like an athlete comin outta retirement, i gots something to prove
that even Canada with their army...
...could walk over ya crew
self punch,metiphore = 3
The way his lines are so simple, you'd think he's in the 2nd dimension
The only way you a GuestofHonor...is at a wackness convention
personal,metiphore = 7
Just like skill, the result of victory is what your unable to catch
yea you checkin in second...
...just like the result of this match
-flo,metiphore = 4

You deserve alot of respect for dropping a pretty good verse on a kid who didnt even try. I take it even if he did you woulda had this one. Only problem in your verse is the complexity of your wordplay, I trust quite a few missed sum very clever concepts.
Overall = 36
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Vote = T West

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