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Break down..

.iLL.:

Your lines were horrible…stop that got damn dashing ish..
Your punches were not good. But you directed it towards your
Opponent.
Favorite line..
“Only Time Yur Flow Is Dope Is When U Do "coke lines" Like Whitney// (4”
The line on the bottom was horrible as well



Intoxicated:

Nice structure steady flow..Nothing spectacular with punches at all to me..
Nothing witty work on that,..You probably rushed your verse because you
Seen what he typed…over all average..

My vote goes to Intoxicated only because of structure and a better diss scheme

Ill:

First of all, get rid of the labels...first bars an open, last is a close, we can count the bars.

-\Opener/-
Ima Make This Nigga 'unknown', It'd Be Best If Ya Just Postpone//
Voters Mistake Me For A 'pituatary gland', I'll 'make this whore-moan'(hormone)// (1)
Nice play
-\Sorry To Be So Mean..But../-
Beat My Style? Kid Your Like 'Egypt' In 'a-state-of-de-nile'//
Reaching My Potential Is Like A Fat Kid Running 5 Miles// (2)
again, nice play
Like 'Auntie Kaths' Cookies, Yur Gonna Get Rolled, Roasted, Then Off To Dispatch//
This Battle's Like Women's Sumo Wrestlin, The Way Its A Huge 'Miss-Match'// (3)
hahah...
I Could Give A Fuck About Intoxicated Cause Hes Fake Like A Silicone Titty//
Only Time Yur Flow Is Dope Is When U Do "coke lines" Like Whitney// (4)
ok ok
-\Dat, Dat..Dat's All Folks!/-
My fist to ya face will 'connect' Faster Than DSL//
Have Ya 'ringin' More Times Than The Alexander Graham Bell// (5)
nice

intoxicated:

Son...
I've seen that wordplay before... is ya brain in two spots??
Tox blazin ya drop ... i'm so .iLL. it can't be .contained in two dots. (Think on this 1)
not much ta think about
rhymes haunt you ... echo in ya head like base in a box
ya punches?? ya, they're all forced ... like fakin a cough
brutal
leave you traced in the chalk ... another case for the cops
splattered ya head on cement n cleaned ya brains wit a mop
ok, basic
im sick of wack ass bitches who keep claimin they nice
But really couldn't think under pressure wit their brain in a vice
wordplay worked
got you duct taped n tied ... got razors n knives that takin ya life
you couldnt escape if you were a dragon in a cage made of ice
Not really a close

Aight. when I read Ill's verse, I was thinkin "this is pre-written", but really amazin word play. And, before I read intoxicated's verse, I was leanin towards givin it to intox, cuz there were no personals in ill's. But, then there was only one ( I think ) crappy personal in intox's, so hell no.

Vote - Ill

LoL, You're just mad cuz i voted against your wack shit against John Dough....

Fuck outta here you hate votin newbie....

Uppin for some non hate votes

wtf...fuck you man, he had ur ass. These are all dick ridin votes, you piece of shit. You had fuck all on Ill. I jus saw ur link and went ta vote, since you voted on my battle. Fuckin punk, now Im not allowed ta vote against you?

FUck you stay outta my threads


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Fuck you, I'll post where ever the fuck I want, you sucked! Take some criticism you fuckin pussy!