Here is how I saw the battle

flow/ Oakley had a gud flow goin on with sum nice rhymes in there and gud voc.; Azn didn't had such a gud flow cuz his vocabulairy was whac, there wasn't anything special
punchlines/ Oakley had great punches and they just came harder; Azn that line bout hokey pokey was whack, you need to work on your punches and personals cuz you didn't have any personals at all, Oakley had a cuople of nice personals
Oakley also had multies who were great; Azn you need to elevate

Vote oakley
Hit back on this thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596

Aight, I can vote now, n Oakley definately took this, cuz he had a nice closer, multis, and plays. Both sides were kinda weak, azn your punches were aufle, work on dat shit.

peace

Hit up my battles

uppin

oakley may have won this one but owell im new jus startin out i be bak to get oakley lata

heres how it is
 

this was a rel good verse had some good personals and had a good flow cant really tell you to elevate good work hommie your a good MC in my books.......




ok now ima bout to battle a kid name oakley,
turn ur ass around kid lyk u doin the hokey pokey,
cuz i already won this battle shawty okie dokie,
bitch im already tired of battlin im a drive to maryland,
u herd i dont hit women so u got a sex change, now ya name carolen,
ya gon break ya knuckles trin to hit me dat hard quess wut...im still standin,
bitch only wanted to battle i looked like a herb wit 3 posts
trust me my punches n punchlines will break ya nose,
this cat lookin for newbs so he can brag n boast,
get over it u lost i exposed u lyk janet jackson's tit,
shut up bitch look who the herb now i jus finished it

WoW u need to elevate in ever catigoir lets put it this way u got served merked and killed.......got to LL and see how shit is done it can give u some pointers and u can see how to structuer your shit if u need any help just PM me thanx ....................
v/Oakley