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Se7en and Hot Streak you both had nice verses, had a lot of good punches and personals, hot streak you need to work on your sturcture but your flow is tight se7en your structure is awesome but your flow fluctuates instead of just steady flowing so you need to work on that. Hot streak you gotta work on getting your punches to hit a little harder make em more personal...
good battle if i would vote on this id vote for se7en |
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My shit keeps poppin’, like bombs droppin’ and not stoppin’ Cause I’m toppin’ this Hot Streak, so it’s hotter than a video by Bin Laden ok...these are pointless multis...notice how they're not punches/personals/metas? They have no use except to jus have multis in ya verse....Dun use multis by themselves as they are weak Noddin’ this kid off, wit no respect, no sweat running down my neck I’ll regret and check, how I turned him into newbiest MC on the Net 1st line is filler..no punch..2nd line is played I met the standards easy, he popped up weezy and some wat queezy I’ll hit this guy till he leaves me, but when I say he’s done, he don’t believe me also weak attempt at a punch He sees me and ducks down quick, he thinks shit, when he trys to spit But his style breaks apart like an earth quake, had his computer split Again useless multis..no real punch... I’m gaspin’, and laughin’ at this, cause I’m gonna stay to this game rappin’ He’s more used and popped, than a whole fucking bottle of Asprin’ MODs should’ve said no, they know, no way this kid will be able to flow Even if I gave him my own ryhmes, rapped, and he sat and took notes more filler....you gotta get creative with ya punches/personals/multis Posts??????Bitch slapped, ghetto wrapped, his style is a all out mis-match He couldn’t spit a decent punch, if he had Evolve’s battle rhymes attached 2nd line is your best punch/mets of your rhyme Gats, blast, gun fire is heard, from the hood, to the mothafuckin’ sub-burbs But that’s the sound of this bitch, getting shocked and shot by iLL ass words filler Hot Streak~ It's truly interesting how this fucka Se7eN wanted to battle with the Streak Reppin' real white rappers, we know u just the pretty boy from Dawson's Creek whack meta....refrain from using your own name in your verse..meta was played and unoriginal Your sig's appropriate for this battle, cause now you're gamblin' with the devil U can obtain as many freeposts as ya want, son, ur still not near Streak's level filler and played lines Hidin' your age so nobody can know that your a fifteen year old wigga crew leader I use my ill flows to merk hoes, just for battlin' me u should be called a life cheater No real punches here either...so you called him a wigger...yeah...so?....get creative It's ironic how a wack fucka like Se7eN represents the greatest in his avatar Tryin' to see Hot Streak, but honestly, no human eye can reach that far dun use your name....attempt at a personal..not great..but OK In this fuckin' poker game it's me who's holdin' all the important cards I'm kinda gettin' tired of battlin' fools like you, these wack rappers/retards filler You say that when ya spit right you can fucking merk any other MC Goddamn, you must be spittin' far left as far as I can see from you on RB Ur the leader of the Dynasty Soldiers but u can easily get merked by them Talkin' about how you can spit rhymes, but you can only cough up phlegm weak punches/personals...the gettin merked by his crew line was whack As I merk weak bitches like you on RB my reputation inevitably grows If you wanna survive my blows, you better start eatin' ur Cheerios. no punch...filler once again __________________ Yall have to get creative with your punches and metas....check whackness emergency center for good battle tips...and also check out some LLL battles...Se7en you had a decent verse...so you get the win....But try and come more original..and take tout the filler Pleased drop an honest vothere..I took the time for you...Feedback here would be much appreciated...thanks guys http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113550 |
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Well, I guess you win this fun battle. I'll come back even stronger next time. Good battle. Thanks for the feedback, yall. Please drop a vote on my battle with Tactixx. It's in my sig, below the fire and the gangsta in the fire with da sword and... ya'll get the picture. LOL. Please vote.
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Seven wins.
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