Chugs - your structure is annoying... but you're skills are there... develop them and get a better structure. Overall OK verse, much better than Lust. Work on your punches and personals

Lust - quit rap... or do some serious studying on this site... visit Elevated and Elite and learn what a punch is... you had ONE - it was the mime punch. Weak at best

vote = chugs

actually, both of you should visit elevated and elite frontlines to learn.... that is all.

opener lust
punches tie
flow lust
closer tie
vote im gonna go with lust i think he just barely beat u

chug u need to work on vocab, structure, and personals. urr good at multis

lust vocab and personals ur structure and flow is nice

basically im voting for lust because just about every line in chug's verse was
played or it didnt make sense and what do u c tight about rhymin about kittens

uppin and about the kittens i was just makin a rhyme wo ho there guys...................

sum of it????? most of it................................................ .... uppin

uppin fo votes hook me up illl return the favor

stop bitching if yah wannah bitch do it on your pms not on our battle thread .................... uppin

ill poll vote after i get off aol

ok, chugs took it, for obvious reasons, lust your verse sounded like one of those verses people post as jokes, your obviously very new to the game, and untill you figure out what the hell is goin on, i would suggest you stick to the cypher, and open mic. chugs, work on your structure kid

tear u into pieces cause I conclude~fakers of my species since i'ma weak~mc predator
There are no excuses for u denying that u fill up more lines than a news~paper editor (u have alot of fillers)
Dun explain your punches...it fucks with the flow and is newbish..ok bar..try and shorten them tho
I'll leave~ur~knees~weak...couldnt spit clean if u freshend up ur teeth~with~floss
Ur careers like walkin thru iraqs roads cos u headin down defeats~street n just reached~another~loss
lines are mad stretched...get rid of the ~~~ shit...ok bar
Ur like priests busted for child pornography cause what u preach~is~wrong
Battlin me? This geeks~disturbed...I'm leavin~this~herb 'up in smoke' like cheech~n~chong
nah...played bar
Im raw~spittin, n im not talkin ozzie bitin off bats necks...im sayin bar~dissin
Start jaw~splittin n leave this 'pussy inoffensive' like 'declawed~kittens'
ok
The games~over...i got~skill n keep bumpin~flavor at fruits, is that why u cant taste~wut~I~say
He could play~poker on a uphill runnin~escalator n still coulndnt 'elevate~his~game'
ok...lil played


ur a cum guzzler, thats the only thing u chuggen
r u serious u steeping to me , u must be buggen
ur a faggot ass-nigga, only dicks u be tuggin
whack...staya way from gay lines..."cun guzzler
ur shit is whack it didnt even rhyme
u being able to rap should be a crime
i dont have to say anything, i could beat u if i was a mime
weak..dun feed
ur lines are fillers, ur just wasting time
chugs4life?? be a short one when i end it with a knife
played...
the only bitch i be tappin is ur horny ass wife
do me a favor hop off my dick and get a life
played

Chugs took this easy...Jus a better verse...Good punches/metas/personals... Lust came with too much played gay jokes.

Please drop an honest vote here guys...shits been open forever.,.thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112459 versus freeza pop

Chugs took this...

I liked most of ya lines but the flow was really stretched... that really hert ya....
the punches were good tho and so were the metahz ... pretty decent opener n closer...


But HOLY FUCK, Lust u need to check out wackness emergency center... ya shit flow better than Chugs, i'll give u that... but ya whole verse sucked ass. the best line u had was ya first one and it was still pathetic. Your shit is so basic, you really need to expand ya mind and start figuring out how to write rhymes... not try'n to be mean but u really need to elevate any way you can ... good luck, pz

my vote - Chugs

tear u into pieces cause I conclude~fakers of my species since i'ma weak~mc predator
There are no excuses for u denying that u fill up more lines than a news~paper editor (u have alot of fillers)
dont throw in the explanation, if you have to explain, than its not good, but it was aight, could've been a better bar for an opening
I'll leave~ur~knees~weak...couldnt spit clean if u freshend up ur teeth~with~floss
Ur careers like walkin thru iraqs roads cos u headin down defeats~street n just reached~another~loss
Ok, that was aight
Ur like priests busted for child pornography cause what u preach~is~wrong
Battlin me? This geeks~disturbed...I'm leavin~this~herb 'up in smoke' like cheech~n~chong
plizzayed
Im raw~spittin, n im not talkin ozzie bitin off bats necks...im sayin bar~dissin
Start jaw~splittin n leave this 'pussy inoffensive' like 'declawed~kittens'
nice nice
The games~over...i got~skill n keep bumpin~flavor at fruits, is that why u cant taste~wut~I~say
He could play~poker on an uphill runnin~escalator n still coulndnt 'elevate~his~game'
played n not good enough to close

ur a cum guzzler, thats the only thing u chuggen
r u serious u stepping to me , u must be buggen
ur a faggot ass-nigga, only dicks u be tuggin
He aint black fuck head (I think)
whack...staya way from gay lines..."cun guzzler
ur shit is whack it didnt even rhyme
u being able to rap should be a crime
so fuckin played, actually, it probably isn't, cuz its jus so simple
i dont have to say anything, i could beat u if i was a mime
ur lines are fillers, ur just wasting time
Aight punch, but played rhyme[B]
chugs4life?? be a short one when i end it with a knife
the only bitch i be tappin is ur horny ass wife
do me a favor hop off my dick and get a life
[B]too simple

This was obvious, Chugs4Life. You battled a lot betta here than against me. Where you drund? :spit: