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Envee 02-15-04 11:59 AM

I will vote on Accelarate he had good punches and i like his style plus he did way better the syke did i mean syke wasnt that badd but Accelarate u got mah vote!!

V/Accelarate,

Help me out wiff mah battles here are the links!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114150

/\ that one is envee vs proof

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...132#post1186132

/\ envee vs yowhatup


Vote a'ight mayne peace!

wordplay 02-16-04 06:25 AM

accelerate:your opener was sort of fucked up structure wise, but the humor in the punch made a good bar, out of an otherwise simplistic starter. your punches were fucked, a lot of lines just didn't match or rhyme, but the ones that did hit pretty hard. your overall structure was all wrong, I had trouble reading it, you need to try counting sylables...you had atleast one metaphor, which was ayite, a little wordplay, none really stood out. your closer wayyyyyy too long, but I got what you were saying,so it hit a lot harder after I wread it the second time...

.syke.:your opener rolled a lot better off the tounge, the structure was there but, the punch was soft,plus obvious,which took away from it's power a little. your punches werent really complex or strong, the hospital line is pretty played..your structure was way better than acc's, I don't think you had any metaphors, you had a little bit of wordplay, mostly because you played off his name..your closer was the most witty and complex part of your whole verse, it was a good punch/personal, I just wish your whole verse would've came hard as your finisher....

vote:accelerate
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now hit me back
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=114089&page=2

Accelerate 02-16-04 10:35 PM

SUbe Parriba with the dopeness and all that good shit..

.Syck. 02-17-04 11:45 AM

lol i cant even believe ur winning against the wackest verse i ever spit.. didnt think i needed to try against that garbage ass shit u posted, and im not about to lose to some one as below mediocre as u.. so if u win i want a rematch and i'll actually spit this time.. and i know ur gonna be like no i dont want a rematch i wanna run away with this insignifcant W and talk trash.. but your not even on the level below me.. so instead of posting a 5 minute verse we'll have it due the next day and both try then we'll see who comes out on top..

Accelerate 02-17-04 12:31 PM

Dude..WTF is wrong with you? You think I tried? Stop making some fucking excuses, I mean seriously.Even in FL Im winning against you. I'll have your rematch, I don't care, But now we play by My rules, cuz Im beating you by your own rules...

.Syck. 02-17-04 12:35 PM

good, so neither fo us tried, so this match is insiginificant, i'll admit u beat me when u actually do.. because i know u wont touch me when i spit a verse i spent more then 5 minutes on.. thistime i wont underestimate the stupidity of the newby voters

Accelerate 02-17-04 12:39 PM

THATS EXACTLY WHAT I SAID...You didn't listen to me..Why would I put out a good verse when Imm in FL.lol...Seriously dukes..Even in Elevated I wouldn't try.

.Syck. 02-17-04 12:41 PM

well im not battling you unless you try.. this match right here is a fluke of bullshit since neither of us actually tested out skillz, but i want u to know that im better than you, and i wanna prove it, and if u say u wont try then youll be able to use excuses when i win.. i wanna win fair n square with both of us putting at least a somewhat attempted good verse up.. so.. whats the deal

Accelerate 02-17-04 12:42 PM

Whatever..I'll see what I'll do tonight if Im bored..tomorrow I have to start doing some work so Im not sure if I can do anything for then.

.Syck. 02-17-04 12:45 PM

well wait for me to have 5 wins so im aloud in elevated and we can do it there.. im close to it now so we'll do this in a couple days then

lyricallyabusive 02-17-04 12:52 PM

yo accelarate ill vote u vote me plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114144

I vote you , u vote me?.. Dr/ vote removed, & banned.
-Eddy

.Syck. 02-17-04 01:08 PM

^^lmfao did that really happen.. gotta love front lines

Accelerate 02-17-04 01:09 PM

^Im noble..I reported him..Lmao
Suicide and me go waaaay back

P-Verse 02-17-04 01:28 PM

.Syck. took it for me, nice start although it tailed off toward the end. Accelerate sounded like he was defeated from the start. Your rhymes didn't flow and was just basically poor.

Vote = .Syck.


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