uppin x5 PLEASE VOTE PEOPLE< VOTE VOTE VOTE PLEASE

yo ite this wasnt nething specialk really but id have,
to give it 2 se7en purely baecause,
when it comes down to it 7 had alot better punches,
toke yours came rlly forced and played,
also your shit didnt flow well atall man,
7 you also had alot more personals wich,
is always a good thing man,

plz hit this up now man plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114455 thx ..........

Se7en - some pretty impressive concepts.. harder punches.. but ya vocab kinda put ya flow off.. some stretched lines made the personals lose a bit of force.. but a cool opener an a closer that got a chuckle.. shockin imagery!

Toke - lose the dashes kid.. thas pre-skool style.. an try gettin more personal about ya opponent.. u had a fair bit of jus general filler in there.. cut the uneccesary an it'll make ya verse harder hittin.. but still a solid verse..

VoTe = Se7en

Drop a vote here plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112698

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Se7en ~ Nice shit man, this is actually the firt of your battles I read...pretty damn impressive man..no offense to your opponent, but you made him look like...a herb..I agree with illtalic on the opener at least, dope drop..

Toke ~ Your rhyme seemed...forced..you tried way to hard on your multies and i'd comment on your dashes thing but its been beaten into the ground..you aint bad man, just need to fix a little bitta shit and you'll do fine.

Vote~ Se7en

HoLLa BacK ... thanks.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114599

open- se7en (it was better than mrtokes' his didn't really hit that hard)
close- mrtokes (yo that shit was slick as fuck! shit is hard hittin)
personals- mrtokes (his just appeared out to me more)
punches- se7en (his hit way harder than mrtokes . . had some hella slick punches)
flow- mrtokes (couldn't really find a flow to se7en's)
vote- se7en (punches always wins the battle

nice battle fellaz . . please peep my sig and hit that link up . . return the favor with an honest vote . . it'd be appreciated . . get at me

Se7en Wins By KO as stated in the rules.