i think your wrong.. if somone is actually ill.. then they can actually blind spit.. wich ur prolly one of thos guys that wanna go second.. so hmm u can feed and take the advantage..
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its not ment to be called feedin tho it called fliping the script, and i didnt really feed. and all ya'll stop arguing, thanks tyler for the vote!!! uppin.......
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You're an idiot... How does going off what someone else thought of original? Get tha fuck outta here..And you tha fucking n00b..and his tha worst drop? I remember voting on yours a couple days ago..and that was tha worst And you can tell if its not pre-written if they got personals in it you moron |
yo, thi swas a good battle
TIMELESS...you had a good flow and the structure was definetly there. You had some good, quite hard hittin punches and you had some good personals. Some of your lines made me laugh. You also had some wordplay..Keep it up TILLEYEDIE...you has an aiight flow and again the structure was there. You had some punches but they didn't hit that hard, and your personals were the same. You had some wordplay...Keep it up vote/ TIMELESS return da favour plz...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...659#post1188659 |
Till - didnt flow.. the vocab was too limited.. consistant punches an they were actually quite original.. but they were all stand-alone.. u need to have a kinda thread runnin thru to hold it all together.. the Trapt Wit line was very weak.. not effective as a punch in the slightest.. an it didnt rhyme wiv its accompanyin line.. dont throw other peoples names in to ya verse unless its witty, personal and/or relevant.. not a bad verse overall but lacked creativity an flow..
Timeless - alot more personal.. some creative punches an ya flow didnt fall off.. watch for the played 'sars' an 'jins ass' lines tho.. ya 'Hiroshima' line was prolly the dopest of the battle.. nice witty verse an some cool concepts.. props.. VoTe = Timeless |
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