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-   -   John Dough |vs| KayOhh (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=114742)

$pitacular 02-17-04 03:06 PM

John - Witty punches, wordplay, it was all there. Nice well rounded verse, it's good to read decent drops in Front Lines...

Kay - you need to focus on punches instead of rhyme scheme... if this was a freestyle contest maybe you would impress peeps, but that style don't work for text battles. Sex punches are played as hell too, so elevate

vote - john

Archeologist 02-17-04 06:34 PM

John.:. ok verse it had a bit of every thing, your flow was aiight a bit patchy though..
Not a bad opener and closer but they were ok, some good punches but some missing aswell..

Kay.:. Good verse it also had everything init, your flow was consistant also a bit patchy.. aiight opener but made up your closer was wack! however you had some great punches but some non-hittin aswell...

\/0te...Kayohh

Archeologist 02-17-04 06:35 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...014#post1194014

hit dis up please............................

John Dough 02-17-04 11:58 PM

Rascal...you just copy and pasted spits vote you fag

KayOhh 02-18-04 12:25 AM

Jesus...one fuckin vote against you, and ur dissin, fuckin pussy. Thx fo tha vote Rascal.


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