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both yall niggaz verse was horrible damn...............wtf was that wat was that inspecta sexy fukin talkin about but vote=halob but u still need to get ya skills up

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come on this battle is almost done
3 more vote at least you did rap aginst me other people
quit but they talk made shit

ha ha hey your lines were pretty good not they did not rhyme and the beging was gay

halob got this by a mile
he had
better structure
better punchlines
better rhymes

dont be a bitch inspecta, just let ppl. vote and dont talk shit

uppin3 vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote\voye vote

thank u for vote on my battle
i am winning my 4 battle

hey i need some people to vote, vote all you want
come on this battle is almost over

hey i am doing pretty good yall need to vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote

Halob.....even though this verse was a little better....you need to take my advice and work on what I say you know.............when I battle again I'll show you...................same critiques as other battles................work on stronger punches cause these were kinda weak......and simple like

[QOUTE]yo, inspecta, i done inspected your wacky flows/
dud you suck just amited every body knows//[QUOTE]

I see you tried wordplay with his name.....but words like "wacky" ain't kool......so just keep workin aight................3.5/10

Inspecta.........your verse kinda had me confused.........I was tryin to follow it, but I kept getting lost......ya'll have to understand that verse structure is everything....if your verse isn't structered right, then people won't even care what you have to say.....so work on that, and the rest will follow...........1.5/10

TOoN Has Spoken

we need some more people to vote come come on come on vote vote vote vote vote vote vote

halob i got give you this one cause it was tight inspecter your shit might be better if you rhyme( no disrespect ) upping