y i see madd post but only one vote
this battle is madd tardy uppin yall and ill take a look at yall shit too up |
authentic, i dug your still ((funny:slap up this kid like......im ricks james bitch))))
((nice line:now i know i smell pussy so u must be irv finisher(((complex:so ill battle u now, and beat ya ass afterword(()() good usage of his name ________________ afterword u definetatly got the vocab part of this, but your punches were played : silicon tits line been played over and over, and thats yo finisher, not likin that.... and it wasn't in the rulez but u aiint soposed to bite. all and all i didnt like how u came at this battle i jus didnt like your style vote:authentic yo i dropped a honest vote on ya'll get at my battles in my signiture, PLLEAZE HIT DEM UP |
I got too give this too afterword becuz he had a better vocab and an okay flow even though i kinda kept getting confused but good battle and authentic step it up
|
yo lets get some real comments
nothing matters until, Afterword uppin |
lets get it poppin in this bizznatch
uppin and ill peep out yo battle just leave a link |
i read both,wasnt impressed by either....but authentic had some multies at least n he posted first...closin line was ok i guess...afterward...nothin stood out in ur verse to me...so imma give this to authentic
|
come on yall can we get some votes and feed-bak
this shyt is so old honest votes even though i know, i riped his ass |
yo yo yo
uppin end this please rock da vote! __________________ |
authentic tried to come out the gatez swingin had but the punchz werent that hard and waznt very many personalz best thing u had waz structure
afterword had hiz shit locked had hard punchz all threw the verse and had more personalz i felt that shit more better wordplay and grammer 2 And your flows is as authentic As a porno chic with silicon tits, vote/afterwood return the favor ghost vs threatz ghost vs gdeuce ghost vs gkillaz |
yo leave a poll vote
and ill be sure to check out ya battle peace uppin |
yo does ne one vote anymore?
ill hit yurs come on now yall peace |
AfterWord
Open 8/10 Close 8/10 Rhymes 7/10 Flow 7/10 Punches 8/10 38/50 Authentic Open 6/10 Close 7/10 Rhymes 6/10 Flow 6/10 Punches 7/10 32/50 |
ok man breakdown for authentic: 6/10
bestline:no need to even bring out the fists slap up this kid like......im ricks james bitch that shit was ok breakdown for afterword 8/10 not bad bestline:No need to pretend, I’ll put u in a state of vegetation Without hesitation, to yur creator you’ll b contemplating/ afterword gets my vote elevate and staypimpin peace |
yo thanx for da comments yall
and ill hit ya battle with an honest poll if u can help me close this one peace uppin |
AFTERWORD
FLOW=8 PUNCHES=7 OPEN=7 CLOSE=5 authentic01 FLOW=8 PUNCHES=8 OPEN=7 CLOSE=6 authentic01 GETS MY VOTE CUZ I WAS FEELING HIS RAP MORE |
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 12:49 AM. |