$$upreme: You need ta elevate Completely Structurely, vocab , and punches.
your stuff didnt even rhyme half of the time, so just reread your
stuff and practice on what you need to work on

accomplishment: your verse was aight. your structure was moderate and
your flows along with punches and the whole nine. if i had to say to work on something it would have to be structure (explain anything you think people wont understand it shows a lil more veteran kind of style)

open: accomplishment
close: accomplishment
personals: accomplishment
metas: accomplishment
punches: accomplishment
multis: accomplishment
V/ ACCOMPLISHMENT

my vote goes to accomplishment. he came harder and had good flow, but u could have came more correct on the twin tower reference. if we ever battle ill make sure to drop a reference for ya. vote=accomplishment.


vote for the authentic vs. puertoricanelly battle.

$$upreme you got down homie, but i believe that accomplishment took this one. in all honesty, his verse just stuck out more in my mind when i completed reading them. i like both of your guys' style and look forward to peeping out your work in the future. much love battlecats..

s.v.

There wasn't much to pay attention to in Supreme's verse until the last few lines, which were solid enough. Up to that point it was all "I'll shoot you, you're gay and you suck dick," which has to be done REALLY WELL to impress me anymore.

Accomplishment rose above that conceptual level and delivered a pretty steady stream of punches, many of which were solid. He gets the vote for the more all-around superior verse.