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what da vinci u didnt vote right and upin 4 votes.
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youngs:... it was clear that u need a lot on of work mainly on structure and vocab...this was pure out pitiful and your punchlines were weak...elevate
disaster:...yours was okay...structure is alright...u had more punches then young that was the major thing that stood out..and vocab was fair great job v/disaster |
disaster took this on punches alone. yall both have along way to go work on your structure youngstar, this is a battle yall need to use some more personals.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~upin for votes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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A disaster had better punches and they were more personal and straght to the point. also the finishing lines crushed you, but youngstar stay up and keep battling
iiiiight den IM OUT!!!!!!!!!! |
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