First off. Congrats to botha yall.
Young, you had a great line length and I found it easy to read an found the rhymes. Great use of vocab, but a lil weak with the punches. I also liked the consistant rhyme for the first 5 lines. But it whent a lil weaker after that.

Will, you had good punches, great 2 line rhyme goin on. lil to large on the lines sometimes but thats alrite. better too much than too lil eh. Structure was good and good use of references "like the wack asian off American Idol being shitty is the only way ull get worldwide".

vote/ Will a peer

uppin tell me a battle u need votes on and ill hit it up

YoungStar*, pretty good,

"i trynot to say too much of tha derogiitory
but against bitches like u ma negative iz obligatory
ma shit so unbelievable they put me in a observatory"

I liked that shiz, the rest wasn't as good as that though.

3/5

will a peer,

"tray six hasnt replied cause they didnt wanna make u cry basically uve been denied
like the wack asian off American Idol being shitty is the only way ull get worldwide"

Loved it, everything he said to you, you returned it twice as hard.

And you ended it Very Nice with this line...

"u dont have shit u dont have crowds and u aint gettin paid
ill write the raps u stick to writin chants 4 the gay parade"

that made me chuckle, so you get my vote.

4/5

My Vote... will a peer