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SUPERVILLAIN 03-16-04 12:02 AM

uppin' for some fair votes on these freestyles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

c'mon battlecats, help me and deportarican-nelly (ha ha, im just playin' homie) finish this one upper. one love.

s.v. the kingpin

SUPERVILLAIN 03-16-04 03:38 PM

uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!!

s.v.

SUPERVILLAIN 03-16-04 06:22 PM

uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!! uppin' for votes!!!

s.v. the kingpin...........c.s.
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SUPERVILLAIN 03-17-04 12:37 AM

uppin' for some fair votes people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

s.v.

Willa 03-17-04 02:04 AM

supervillain good punches good flow work on vocab and personals
pnr ok punches a few were played work on vocab and personals
super took this barely

Impendance 03-17-04 02:35 AM

I liked your stuff SV but the Nelly diss' were a bit overdone I chuckled the first time but it got a bit ghey.

prepare for war to come, four horsemen with swords and guns,
ridin' in to enforce that your corpse is gunned,

I really liked that good work, also I dint like the HEERREEE. Bit gay, next time you should use /'s to help with the flow of it. Not many multies etc. But you still get my vote.

SUPERVILLAIN 03-18-04 03:41 AM

uppin' for some fair votes on these freestyles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

c'mon battlecats, help me and deportarican-nelly (ha ha, im just playin' homie) finish this one upper. one love.

s.v. the kingpin

Da Vinci 03-18-04 06:21 AM

I didn't think that this was much a battle. In my opinon Super killed PRnelly. Anyverse any style, from the metta's, puches flows this was a one sided battle. No disrespect I think that PR Nelly defintatly has room to elivate, more than likely he probably just needs to get his feet wet with battle'n more.

Da Vinci

Issachar 03-18-04 08:52 AM

Ny1stunna broke this down correct. PRNelly did an acceptable battle verse but used some fairly played-out concepts (MJ) and didn't make his punches hard enough (DeNiro). I liked SuperV's opener pretty well, and he brought some nice complex multi's, but around the halfway point ("DERRRRRTY") his stuff really fell apart. The punches stopped connecting and stuff just didn't make as much sense in general. Only the rhyme scheme kept it going.

It's a vote for Supervillain, but he just about snatched defeat from the jaws of victory with this one.


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