lilrenegade: Your shit was a bit Basic need more word play in there bro You need to fix your structure because that shit is hard to read.. looks like you put no effort into your (key style)

Dragon Rage: Had a More Unique' all around Better Flo, Hit on punches ... good Choice of Vocab good Flo Stucture.. and it just came out on Top in this Battle

Votes Conducted on:

Personals: Dragon
Flow: Dragon
Structure: Dragon
Word Play: Dragon
Complicity: Dragon
Punches: Dragon

Easy to say Over all "Dragon"


so ThereFor...

Vote: Dragon

nice battle

lilrenegade-ur verse wasnt all that good...u had sum basic rhymin words that is played out...ur flow was good tho..rolled off my toungue nicely..and lose the paragraph form..it makes it harder to read n throws off ur flow...jus change thath it up n you should be on ur way to de top

rage-better verse than renegades...had a nice flow but the way u had it kinda threw me off n the flow...but managed to still flow it out...nice vocab n u had a better structure n form..jus do sum minor changes n u should be good to go

overall-good battle but my vote goes to rage cuz he had a better verse

v/rage

peace

Ight ight ight That was a real wack battle but i'm sorry to the otha dude but like Renegade Murked ya ass! Madd Shots! The flow was choppy but i liked it anyway one up vote renegade!

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hahaha this vote dont even need to be explained.....every category goes to dragon.....flow,structure,punches,enjoyment....etc .......vote = dragon
return the favor wit an honest vote.....me vs daclassic
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117024

lil renegade:..hey yo i felt ya wrath u tried to come hard but not enough....u really need to take time and think for a little

dragon: its obvious who one....better vocab lyrical content punches were hittin i like

v/ dragon

please return the favor and vote in my battle a honest opinion
at daclassic vs L.I. its in the front page front lines go check it out thankx

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I'm givin this one to Dragon. Battle was good, but when it cam e to rhyming and intricate structure -- Dragon merked this shit. Both good flows though. LilRenegade bout to come up. For now though -- it's Dragon's time.

UBR