lol @ that one kid in here, that said he's the black Em hahahaa!!!

anyways, back to the thread.. this piece was aight, nice n simple..

lol that was me. :cool: I was jokin', though. Well, I edited 2 lines near the bottom. Do the lyrics flow betta now?
As for the beginnin', I don't know what I could do to make it stronger. I'm done editing this freestyle. It's best that I move on to makin' new freestyles. :thumbup:

Yo, that was pretty tight son, you could up your vocab a little, but it was pretty tight none the less. Check my Made You Look freestyle and let me know what ya think aight.

thanks, man. I'm goin' to check urs right now. :thumbup:

Lol.................. Wow!!!!! :)