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THUGZ LIFE 03-19-04 06:45 PM

I Cant Vote So

Im Just Gonna Say That Was Sorry

THUGZ LIFE 03-19-04 06:46 PM

But It Was Coo 4 A Bunch Of Squares
Yalsl Suck Balls

THUGZ LIFE 03-19-04 06:57 PM

WEAK BATTLE
BUT MY VOTE GOES 2
UnbornRookie

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Cprogress

Afterword 03-19-04 08:09 PM

this shit is fuckin lame
we only get one vote/post per day
im not patient, so I dont like 2 wait
and im no punchline rapper, so they hate
and this yungsta thinks im butt hurt
but I dont even notice him as i brush the dirt
off my shoulda, and keep it G like I'm suppose ta

on da real, niggaz in here dont wanna battle the wanna be comedians

UnbornRookie 03-19-04 09:47 PM

yea boy.....still upppinnn in this mother'!!!!!!!!

one mo locks it baby

UBR

LaTiNKiTTeN 03-19-04 10:21 PM

aight...i peeped this shit,unborn...i think ur closing line flowed nice...neither one of u had any hard hitting punches in my opinion....but,afterword,nothing really stood out from ur verse...unborn,the last bar was decent...apart from that,both were pretty much on the same level

vote=unborn

UnbornRookie 03-20-04 05:45 PM

oh shit....here we go...votes revoked......yea, i'm kinda excited...i get to beat this kid twice with the same battle....lol. Still uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppin'!!!!!!!!! !!

UBR

Kingz 03-20-04 06:39 PM

opener:"Ya rhymes is loose - they won't hold up - ya need suspendas /
'Cause you be fuckin yaself worse than hermaphroditic sex offendas " that was hot - rookie

flow: rookie
metas - rookie
finisher - rookie

my vote goes to unbornrookie

honest vote on these plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116751
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116732


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