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-   -   Srry but he keeps talkin shit Accomplishment Vs. Gunfamgeneral254 (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=116769)

example kid 03-19-04 03:09 PM

a accomplishment i really wasnot feelin his shitye he needs to work on his vocab and he wasnot all that funny except for a 1 or 2 punches
he really didnot accomplish anything

gunfam had better punches i liked his style he u could tell he wanted it more

accomplishment 03-20-04 12:38 AM

still need vot5es hurr ddirtas

Willa 03-20-04 02:12 AM

opener ac
punches gf
vocab tie
personals tie
closer gf
vote gf his punches hit just a lil harder i think u guys should do a rematch

Gambino 03-20-04 03:23 AM

My vote goes to acomplishment his rhyme skeem was better

and gunfam was kinda plain through most of it

Kingz 03-20-04 04:51 AM

ac - ya structure was good and it was good to read but im gunna give this one to gunfam cos i was rele feelin' his flow.

Dog I'll Put A Hole Through Yo Fuckin Chest/
Your Name Is Accomplishment/
Well My Rhyme Will Break Yo Success/

this line was tight

vote - gunfam

honest votes on these plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116751
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116732

accomplishment 03-20-04 01:31 PM

yeh it was kina plain i just try to mix shit up you know keep bitches on there toes but thats just my style ya'll gotta learn that

accomplishment 03-20-04 10:21 PM

yo uppin for votes and actually read da lines dont just vote for dat fag

GUNFAMGENERAL254 03-20-04 10:28 PM

Fuck U U Mad Cuz I'm Winning So Far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LaTiNKiTTeN 03-21-04 10:04 AM

well,i think both were kinda on the same level...accomplishment told a story kinda...i didnt like this part..."Drink Anti-Freeze put ona Cap and Sweater...Some Gloves a Jacket and some boots might even be better...cuz when i get on dis microphone my rhymes as cold as artic weather" that was really gay,rhymes are cold like artic weather?thats weak....

gunfam..the jigga line is weak as fuck...but i liked this
Your Name Is Accomplishment/
Well My Rhyme Will Break Yo Success/
at least u had a lil bit of personals...u had a slightly better flow...but a lil more basic rhymes

one more thing,accomplishment had like 3 different lines about the same thing,its over before it began type thing...that was gettin really tiring to read...
overall imma give it to gunfam
vote=gunfam


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