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-   -   DisasterPeice420 Vs. GUNFAMGENERAL254 (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=117841)

Willa 04-02-04 02:28 AM

vote gun he hit just a lil harder
dp what happened i no ur alot better than that
both could work on structure a lil
vocab and personals 2

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-02-04 11:20 AM

(Laugh My A$$ Off) ' .. DAMN!!!! WTF' ... Alright All My Shit Can't Be Good' You Know But I Thought This Shit Was A Bit Better Then My Last 2Battles' But I Guess Not!!' ...

!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ahhh Let Me Evelate

CounTREE Jay 04-02-04 11:30 AM

Yo, I tought it was a close battle, i wasn't really feelin' gun flow that much though. D Peice killed me wit this shit Man You Make Me Laugh, You Help Me 'Pass-The-Time',/
You A Rapper?, Nah Faggot You A 'Comedian-In-Denial',/. I don't even care if it don't rhyme all that nice. This nigga gun fam's first three lines had me madd confused to how they fit together too. But, I think she came harder, and smacked a lil' more, her flow was better, and punches, and I give it to her.

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-02-04 11:32 AM

Awwwwww :) Appriciate The Vote!!!!!! .... It Was Highly Needed.. Even Though I May Loose This Battle!

Upppppppppin 4 More Votes!!!!!!!!!!!! People!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SPuLâ„¢ 04-02-04 04:22 PM

I liked both of your verses. But some of DP's lines didn't flow all that well. I've seen some of her stuff and it is pretty hot, but this wasn't one of the hottest. Some shit didn't rhyme. As for Gun, liked your flo and vocab. So u got my vote by a little. Keep droppin', both of you. PEACE

Also, return the favor. It's my battle with Stabbolical in my sig.

YoungStar* 04-02-04 07:56 PM

close battle but it came to first 3 lines of Gunfam's verse not connectin in anyway
that wuz the only reason DP won..becuz her verse wuz weak comparably
if gunfam's first 3 lines wurr a mediocre opener he wudda had the vote cuz their punches wurr evenly matched
gunfam tole me to vote so i did..truth told and here iz the painful part...
VOTE:DISASTERP

IlluGin 04-02-04 08:04 PM

Gun had pretty decent flow ,aight vocab and better punches
Disasterp you surprised me i thought ud come out stronger than that
your punchlines need work but i like yer flow still and i know ur talented from ur other verses ive read
still im gonna have to say
v/GunFam


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