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A-Cubed 04-03-04 11:32 AM

GBKilla: 4/10
Hmm...Well Your Flow Was Decent, But You Need To Work On Word Usuage, Vocab, Metaphors, and Mulits. Elevate All Around Playa.

ILLUGIN: 5/10
Your Flow Was Nice, and You Tried To Throw Punches but Your Word Usuage Needs To Elevate. Mulits and Metaphors Would Be A Nice Addition. Keep Elevating.

Vote - Illugin

i agree totally with what restricted said...hes analysed it word perfect in my eyes...

Peace brothers...
nice battle keep elevatin

A-Cubed

IlluGin 04-03-04 11:37 AM

iite sum1 come rap this up with a 5th vote so i can move on to anotha battle
uppn

IlluGin 04-03-04 11:58 AM

uppn for the last time hopefully
someone end this shit

L.I. 04-03-04 12:08 PM

illugin got this wit his flow, some decent punches but indirect ones, and better structure....work on gettin multi's in there n more sustainment....overall nice verse
GB u had hardly any flow at all....u need to werk on not stretchin lines!!....that will get u structure n sustainment probably....werk on punches....werk on everything man ull get better....n battle people at ur level for now...........aight
VOTE - illugin
return the favor........
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117844


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