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GBKilla: 4/10
Hmm...Well Your Flow Was Decent, But You Need To Work On Word Usuage, Vocab, Metaphors, and Mulits. Elevate All Around Playa. ILLUGIN: 5/10 Your Flow Was Nice, and You Tried To Throw Punches but Your Word Usuage Needs To Elevate. Mulits and Metaphors Would Be A Nice Addition. Keep Elevating. Vote - Illugin i agree totally with what restricted said...hes analysed it word perfect in my eyes... Peace brothers... nice battle keep elevatin A-Cubed |
iite sum1 come rap this up with a 5th vote so i can move on to anotha battle
uppn |
uppn for the last time hopefully
someone end this shit |
illugin got this wit his flow, some decent punches but indirect ones, and better structure....work on gettin multi's in there n more sustainment....overall nice verse
GB u had hardly any flow at all....u need to werk on not stretchin lines!!....that will get u structure n sustainment probably....werk on punches....werk on everything man ull get better....n battle people at ur level for now...........aight VOTE - illugin return the favor........ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117844 |
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