uppin for votes

ya phat mic took this easily.....
he had the punches, flow, structure, creativity, and sustainment.
atticus....i liked ya flow alot....jus werk on keepin ur bars close tot he same amount of syllabes....u dont want stretched lines....and get more direct punches....u have potential....but u cant just rhyme about shit like you did....you have to get at him with direct punches n use personals....aight good luck..........
vote - phat
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...45&page=1&pp=15

yea like i said my shit gotta get out the garbage... uppin

y'all both had y'all points but i got my guy Phat Mic fa now BUT he currently a no show when it comes ta battlin' this female... Don't set a battle if ya not prepared don't be scared cuz i'm a femcee stop runnin' check out Missfiyagurl VS. Phat Mic and see wut i'm talkin' 'bout... and
Get At Me.

yeah, umm, very one-sided battle, phat mic takes this one. Better in every category, and he wasnt even that good, all i can say is, elevate atticus.

hit this up
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118096