my vote goes to marv.. he had better punches/ a better flow and was able to get more across with less in my opinion
miss rapped about herself more and thats not what suppose to gon on in a battle

Vote Marv

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...98&page=2&pp=15

m-a-r-v-o-l-o-u-s had brought it in this battle sick ass metaphorz and punch linez almost every bar didnt see personalz that much and structure waz a lil off but that aint shit aywayz

fiyagirl had better structure a few nice punchz but i dotn thank u waz really into it u almost complimented ur self az much az u dissed him

vote/marvolous

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jea my structure is kind of fucked up...but goodlookin tho i got u

umm uppin 4 votes man niggaz need da wake da fuck up and vote

marv had that really good "platinum" diss, i like the worldplay there, but I think some of the other stuff misses. flow is decent, but could use some work (not too important to many anyway, so whatever). miss had really nice flow and nice rhymes, the rap is readable and everything but it's not really a "battle rap" so I give this one to marv.

My vote goes to marvolous, he had better punches, structure, vocab, flow, I think his verse was all round better.
Missy you had a solid verse but you were just blown away, if you had some better vocab, punches an wordplay you would have stood a chance.
Structure: Marv
Flow: Marv
Punches: Marv
Wordplay: Marv
Vocab: Marv
Personals: Marv
Good Battle
Vote: Marv

jea goodlookin out niggaz........4-0....................

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yo this battle goes to marvol
Marvol-good rhyme, not enouph punches but over all a good flow i lik the style of your lyrics but you can flow alot better than this good structure i just felt that the rhyme could have went in a better direction
Miss-i only have one thing to say. i like your verse its quick and it gets to the point no bullshit add in words just to take up space. the only problem is that i didnt fell that your lines ryhmed. but still a valient effort. good work both of you