hittin this up for votes on the account that I want to get this over and done with, wether the result is something i want or not... please vote and leave a valid reason... no hate votes or all that shit...

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my vote got kicked out.. so ill try again

albi-i thought ya verse was weak, you could drop that rap on anyone +
ya flow was ok, could be alot better, i didnt c alot of good punches
there was like one,
"Believe me, I have all due respect, but this bitch is like a dick that cant erect"
that was nice would enjoy to c more of those, all and all i give you 3/10

miss- i thought ya rap was short and to the point, nice flow, a couple of solid punches

"say she can drop her verses deadly/
pullin' her notebook out sayin' wait til i'm ready"

ya ending was not as good, i acctually expected alot more
all over it was a tight battle but you got my vote, for straight punches
and good text structure, hope to see you improve on ur meti's to punches
6/10

vote Missfiyagurl

Ok, this is the last time I can UP for votes... so erm, can y'all hit this up to get a quick result, I would apriciate it... see, I even asked nicely without climbing up y'alls asses and whiping them clean with my tongue...

Albi
Ya structure was a bit stretched and dragged punches on till they barely scratched the surface. I liked the consistency in the rhyme but it was made harder to read. If ya dim down ya line lengh a bit and just go for straight punches u'll do better. u don't have to explain ya punches, would you explain to a nigga why you punched him in the face? lol. I got a lot to work with especially for ya first try.


Miss
I preferred the structure and flow. had a better punch.
say she can drop her verses deadly/
pullin' her notebook out sayin' wait til i'm ready/
Thats the best punch i seen in the whole thing. She kept her line lengths to a minimum, i like that. Makes it easier to evaluate. I was feelin ya consistant rhymin steady flow too. Ran at a steady pace too.

I'd say Miss takes it, it was pretty even, but miss had a better punch and structure.

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Thanks guys. Great battle

Fa those that don't know, the first day i got on here Kuniva was the one who told me to spit and immediately added me ta the crew A-1 Lyricists when i didn't know anything about it if ya don't believe me y'all get at him...

iight thyz iz goin ta mi55y, 5he kept her flow an 5trukture kon5tint an it waz 5weet an 5imple... albi gurl i ain't haten on u er nuthin, but ya gotta work on ya flow, allya linez were dragged out, an mabey it would get the point akkro5 without da - an //...thaz juz annoyin, ya got 5ome good 5hyt if ya kan ¢enter out. but ya w/e my Vote mi55y

ok both could work on structure especially the first 1 missy u need to work on vocab really bad the other guy does 2 and both could work on multis
vote goes to albi he simply came harder better punches and better vocab u both need to really elevate though

okay good shit...i think fiya girl u came real week mah it aint even look like u was tryin...and al ya shit was hott i dont know if u a dude or a girl lol but i felt ya shit more u aint have dat many punches but u had enuff da win dis battle

my vote-al