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ok this was an alright battle.
Creativity - Baller Personals - neither Punchs - Spul flow/Structure - spul Meta's - baller multi's - baller Spul - I liked yah flow/structure very we'll done some of ur punchs where weak, and others good at best. You did however do 1 thing that must not be done in a battle talk about how ur going to defeat ur opponent thats wack man u can't do that, and expect to win Why’d you take so long? Why’d you hqve to stall? The number after “baller”, is how many times I’ll make fall ^was a decent finisher very creative You like hard, long rods… shoved up your big tushy I’ll stick one right in yo mouth… and call you a big pussy ^made me laugh I’m always “In Da Club”, so they all call me fitty I’ll have more salt in yo mouth, than there is in yo city ^another decent punch not bad Baller - ur verse contained alot of filler, but u had better creativity, and multi's/metah's in ur flow. Punchs where decent, but ur flow/structure through u off. My vote=Spul why we'll from how I broke it down above it seemed like baller had the edge, but spul dropped an all around good verse contained very little filler, and punchs where decent I liked his multi's(altho i thought baller edged him out), but his punchs where stronger which won him this. Baller fix yah rhyme structure, and try not to have so much filler ur verse was decent. Spul stop with this me me I I, and explaining how ur going to kill him u just JUST edged out a win in my books with this battle |
hmmmm ok says I need to have 50 posts before I can vote sry guys guess my vote don't count
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yea, thanks for tryin' atleast. Whenver you get 50 votes, come back. :thumbup: Anyways, Uppin' for votes.
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uppin' fo votes.
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uppin'. I will return favors. Jus drop a link.
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spul wins this some fo his punchlines were hot...i could flow to ballers but it didnt seem to flow as well a spuls any way that was an aight battle but spul takes the win....
Vote:Spul.. i voted on urs...return the favour and vote on....Rollin_Deep Vs Atticus...Aiiight |
you forgot poll to poll vote. If u don't have 50 posts yet, I don't think you can vote. Anyways, Uppin' for votes. I'll return the favor, when I get home.
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yo i'ma finally drop my shit, sorry I delayed ya loss/
now i'm comin, gonna crucifix ya, and leave ya on da cross/ Started out good but then it fell off now u lookin like a controversial movie about christ's passion/ but u and ya raps are whack and outta fashion/ Ehh.... baller comin wit rhymes to make ya bedroom shake/ harder than earthquakes/ only way ya gonna beat me is if the votes are errors or mistakes/ ???? Didn't really make too much sense. still aint gonna beat me, even if ya was da ref/ got retards, blind peeps, and people that are def/ to say i'm still da best/ That was a punch against yourself spul, u a bitch, ya never gonna beat me/ i'ma spit disses to turn ya 360 degree/ Once again, not really a punch spin ya and slap ya, whatchya gonna come wit spul?/ nuttin is da answer, cuz i got my nines and triggers pulled/ Weak....... got 9 lyrical bullets flyin in ya heads direction/ ya gonna be beat hard and left in manic depression/ Blah, blah, blah...... ya just a rappin freshman in this rappin school/ my rhymes are hotta than fire ignitin airplane fuel/ When will this end? look at me, i got spul in check ready to retaliate/ calm down dog, ya shoulda know this was predetermined fate/ Weak closer You like hard, long rods… shoved up your big tushy I’ll stick one right in yo mouth… and call you a big pussy Not bad, could have been worded better I’ll make you so stiff… jus like a toy soldier Cuz I be the devil… sittin’ on yo left shoulder You forgot the punch I’m always “In Da Club”, so they all call me fitty I’ll have more salt in yo mouth, than there is in yo city Weak attempt at a personal, but it was an attempt Your punches are so shitty… you don’t kno when to hit Jus like George Bush… you’re all fart and no shit I just didn't get it SPuL is here to kick yo ass… and make you so soft If I were you… I’d tell your f**kin’ man, to back off Ehh..... Why’d you take so long? Why’d you hqve to stall? The number after “baller”, is how many times I’ll make fall Finally a personal that hits a little! Baller: You didn't have anything that stood out. A bunch of empty punches and weak wordplay (if there was any) isn't gonna get you a win. This is a battle so you gotta throw a few blows....... Spul: You didn't really come that hard either but you had better flow and personals. Keep it up and strive to get better. Vote: Spul |
my vote goes to spul. better punches multies and his verse was better overall
good job by baller but spul came a lil harder and bought his A game vote Spul |
thanks for votin' peeps. Uppin'
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Punches: balla for sure. wtf "tushy" .. that's just weak. spul's whole rhyme is just a bit of new shit and mostly overplayed crap... Props for a nice personal at the end, but still felt weak. balla kept it coming, some of his rhymes were a bit weak but still wins.
Flow: pretty even.. balla mixed it up a bit which is nice, but both slipped a bit imo. Vote: balla Return the favor, vote honest on my battles (check the sig). |
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