let's break this shit down

Quick:

Structure: 8/10 thats damn good homie, check out those bars
Flow: 8.5/10 not one bar I couldnt flow good.. props
Punches: 7/10 listen ya had good lines, well thought, good shit, but nutin extra-ordinary
Multies: 8/10 lots of inners and shit.. fun to read
overall: 8/10

Marvolous:

Structure: 7/10, wans't as good as Quick's but still good
Flow: 8/10 I mamanged to flow it all
Punches: 7.5/10 u had sum nice lines g.. but sum shit I didnt really feel
Multies: 7/10, ya know.. twas good, but not as good as qp's

overall: 7/10

I think quick just took it by a bit.. this shit was close.. both was good
props
just my thoughs homies

i give this one 2 marv he was just a all around spitter

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what the fuck would it be cancelled for? that doesn't make any sense to me

that need be cancelled.. lol

i give this one to quick punch his flows were better than and the structure of the rap was more intact but good battle to the both of you

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Struture & FLow: I think that quickpunch structure was better because even though he had it longer he had more multi to make it flow and i dont usually seei multi being used like that . Marv was more short and he structure wasnt good but it seemed to flow just fine so they tie on that

Punches- I think Marv won the punches. I liked could tell u dont-know-marv..but dogg dat awas trash why u go-so-hard //
u should "serve drinks at a gay club" cuzz all u spit is "homo bars" //
that was some funny shit and it was and opener which makes him win punches too

Vocabulary- neither was impressive but i dont care about that anyway

Vote- Marv but this was close i dont think u guys shouldve made this for banishment cuz it couldve gone either way

ight thanks for the break down...come on ppl vote vote....

Aight fuck it, quick U came with the versatile flow, with fair an your rhymes were fair and I feel that your first bar was your strongest... U hack raps? That a no-no hack your own you'll learn more and anyways know thyself before u know your enemy nigga... My nigga Marvelous , low complexity and fair metaphors, I think your strongest bar was your second. Quick's lines were more expressive and contained more emotion which is key for simulation of flow. Unfortunately marvelous didn't have the metaphors and illusory riddles to defeat quicks complex thoughts.

my vote goes to: quickpunch

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quick punch- i was feelin his verse, nice multies - could have spat a few more tho. some nice meta's in there - liked this one

if you were modelin talliban garments u still wouldn't pose a threat
I keep foes in check lift up the skirt on this pussy and expose a vet

i wrote something similar b4 - overall good verse

marv- ya structure was poor, u could improve on that, u made me laugh tho - thats a good thing, i was feelin's this line

quick punch is a lame and everbody tired of seen dis "pussy on da screen" like "old porno stars" //

you had some nice meta's

vote- quick punch- it was very tight battle but i felt quickpunch came that lil bit harder

hit this battle pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118374

yo uppin man...come on ppl dont sleep on this bannishment battle....we need votes....so please hit it up....thanks

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yeah quickpunch takes this one. his lyrics have a lot more structure and i like the way that the verse goes in the same direction there are no flip flopping. marveluose has skills but they need i little more hoaning. so to sum itall up good battle but this goes to quickpunch.

yo i think quickpunch took this battle by a little bit.. but why you two be doing this banishment bs, i think you're both cool so i'm not voting

it like this people dont know shit on this site but how to dickride on somebodyz record


marvolous merked this nigga eazily had better punchz the wordplay in them waz sick az fuck just needed more multiez in that verse an u woulda won no contest but still had metaphorz in almost every punchline and some good personalz


quickpunch had a good verse had more multiz and some good punchz along with personalz but i think the only thing u beat him in iz structure and dont even know why that shit countz

good battle vote/m-a-r-v-o-l-o-u-s