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Triple_N 04-09-04 02:53 PM

This was a good battle, both guys did what they came to do
Flow: Ghost flowed better an it was easier to read
Structure: Ghost had a basic structure, Gk I don't what his was it was unclear
Vocab: Ghost used more uncommon words in his verse, Gk yo jus start learning new words cuz when u have unique words an u use dem properly u stand out
Punches: Ghost had nice punches they were hard an to the point, Gk his punches were there but they jus wasn't strong enough to topple Ghost
Personals: neither one really had any personals in their verses
Wordplay: there wasn't alot but Ghost snuck a little in his verse, Gk didn't really have any
Ah'ight now y'all can't disqualify this vote, holla at cha boy!

Inception 04-09-04 09:03 PM

that shit shouldnt have been cancelled but fuck it uppin this shit

Nope 04-09-04 09:44 PM

aight her eit is ...
lol this was pretty much a one sided battle ahha
Flow: ghost
Structure: Ghost
Punches: Ghost
Wordplay: Ghost
Vocab: Ghost
Personals: Ghost

aight not to hate but thats how it goes

you need to up your skill and battle sum ppl on your level kid

Inception 04-09-04 09:58 PM

^ that shitz gonna get canceled but uppin for votez

explain em please

Inception 04-10-04 01:11 AM

no mothafuckin body votin lazy ass niggaz dont pm me to vote on your battlez no more if u aitn finna vote on my shit

Inception 04-10-04 03:23 PM

uppin this shit explain yo vote

leave linkz an ill hit u back

MARVOLoUsJ1009 04-10-04 04:42 PM

jea..let me break dis down pause

STRUCTURE-ghost
PUNCHLINES-ghost..real easy
WORDPLAY-nun from both
CREATIVITY-ghost
PERSONALS-nun from both......GHOST took dis shit realy gkillaz ya verse look like u wrote dat drunk 4 real

my vote-GHOST354

RETURN DA FAVOR NIGGAZ!!!!!! MY BATTLES IS ALL OVA DIS SHIT

Inception 04-10-04 11:25 PM

iite this shit should done had been over wit uppin this shit dro pan explained vote an ill get at you

Oc6 The Caustic 04-11-04 12:06 AM

Ok
 
Here we go:

Ghost- You had a good structure and good wordplay. I was feeling your verse more than Gk because you had lots of powerful punches. You need more personals, but you had a few in there, make them stronger. Nice opening and good job on focusing on your oppenent and not going off to your guy's other battle like he did.

Gk- Once again, the same Ghost personal. I don't know if you were the first to say it or what not, but make a more powerful personal, Ghost already saw that one commin'. Don't mention other names or past battles, you need to focus on this battle and nothing else, it threw off your verse. Good punches, but overall, Ghost had the better flow.

Vote: Ghost


Return the favor:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118732

Diablo-Vice 04-11-04 11:32 AM

this is whats goin on
Ghost you spit a crazy verse but i didnt like it and im gonna tell you why. everything was good except you kept changing up the amount of syllable you had in your verse i felt that it didnt flow.
Gkilla your verse wasnt the greatest in the world but i liked the way that the syllable remained constant it flowd together nicely and was nice and easy to feel the vibe of the verse

No hate vote just a personal opinion

Inception 04-11-04 05:25 PM

^^LMAO okay end this batle already

Replay 04-11-04 06:23 PM

i voting for ghost because rap have to ryhme and killaz ain't got that yet. plus i liked ghost's punchlines and flow (all his raps ryhmed). gkillaz - stop sticking in word that don't ryhme like throat and test. you stuck both in when they didn't ryhme with the other words.
best line-your torso full of bullet holez endin up like a desert in tha movie holez/
if u comin out this battle a survivor better get some tipz from beyonce knowlez/

^^ hot son keep going and no beef even if you voted against me.

Inception 04-12-04 04:57 PM

uppin this shit end it already

Inception 04-12-04 09:16 PM

UPPIN shit been up here for a week already damn

Inception 04-12-04 10:45 PM

uppin for votez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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