nah archetype, i'd b the worst in the elevated lines

yo i aint jus sayin this b/c he voted in my favor
but VC droped some ill comments
most lames on here cant recognize the complexities of a lyricist
with different literary elements inscribed within the rhymes
gud shyt folk

upppin

have a bad habbit of flowing spuratic, and it may get hazordous/
but no need for that shit, i can get some old lines out of the attic,
to beat Atticus//

i think the opener killed it. after word im suprised u havent won b4. That was a good job and u improving. Mice flow and metas

atticus ya flow was iight. need more metas and punches

u both need to make it a lil more personal

good battle tho

vote afterword



hit this battle pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118374

yo we got more comments than votes
i appreciate yur concern
but can we end this please
peace
uppin

yo we got more comments than votes
i appreciate yur concern
but can we end this please
peace
uppin

this was a decent battle, atticus if you keep practing you could be a good emcee, its all good though cuz everybody has to start somewhere, so biggups son keep doin' u.
Yo afterword that was a tight verse son, I liked your word usage and how you described this forum you was on point. I also liked how u used your multies, fire son.
Flow: After
Structure: After
Word usage: After
Punches: even
Wordplay: After
Multies: After
Yo, y'all holla back peep it out son
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118131

oh shit my fault I forgot to post my vote
Vote: After

seems like the guy above isnt the only one to forget to poll
lets get sum votes
uppin

yo leave a poll vote
and ill be sure to check out ya battle
peace
uppin

yo drop a few lines and a vote,
and ill be sure to hit ur battle up.
gud lookkin out

peace

come on yall help us close this shyt and move on
i will check yall shyt fo sho
peace
uppin

yo wauts krakin yall
please help a brah out
help us close this old battle so we can move on
and we will hit yurs
uppin

3-0
this is a k.o.
shouldnt it be closed
if not
help me close it(vote)

Afterword

Open 8/10
CLose 9/10
Rhymes 8/10
Flow 7/10
Punches 8/10
40/50

Acctuis

Open 7/10
Close 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Flow 8/10
Punches 6/10
34/50

jea...dis battle was wun sided...att dunn u gota learn da battle rap not sayin it 2 be funny but u do

opener-after...att ya shit didn't ryhme and da structure was fukked up
structure-after..
punchlines-after..hands down other dude aint have nun
creativity-after of course
personals-umm i didn't really see nun from both of u
enjoyed-after...cuzz he came hard pause nahmean punches was landin could of came with some personals but he aint really need..

my vote-after
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120799

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120132
^^^^RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL