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anxiety 04-09-04 12:46 PM

i kind of forgot the link
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118632
hit that up

Rollin_Deep 04-09-04 12:51 PM

Vice In My Opinion You Just About Take This Win Because You both Hit Hard At Each Other But Lokies lines Where overplayed and you kept the flow smooth throughout....

Aight My Vote goes To Vice...
Return the favour and drop a vote on Rollin_Deep Vs Atticus Or Rollin Deep Vs Bowelle(3 More Votez And This Katz KO'd)

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Enygma 04-14-04 10:43 AM

Lokie: You had some nice flow but your punches weren't really hittin. Your personals were OK but you didn't really make them stand out. I liked your flow, it was easy to read. That was about all I liked. You need to use some more wordplay. I also noticed that you stole a line from the late, great biggie smalls. It worked for him, not for you.

Diablo: I liked your verse better. I actually smiled at a line or two. Personals were hittin but you could have used some better wordplay. Overall you had the better verse. Keep It Up!

Best line.......

Ok lokie you say that you spit a good verse
ive seen more lively things coming out the back of a herst
^ Diablo

Vote: Diablo

$$UPREME 04-14-04 10:49 AM

Ok lokie you say that you spit a good verse
ive seen more lively things coming out the back of a herst
I hope you like your name, yeah its a good one lokie
but your girlfriend just told me your dicks like a chopstick and mine like a hogie
im kinda new to this online rappa shit
even so ill destroy any crap ya spit
after battling me on RB get the hell out
your lyrics are dead i also think your a sellout
your a fag and u know it so why do you hide it
like a wannabee gangster and the law u abide it
i hate the way you rap you got no flow or no structure
tell ur mom i got her cash cuz last night ya i fucked her
your a loser a fool
a fuckin fag and a tool
battle me diablo-vice
your ass got taken to school
----VICE HAD BETTER PERSONALS...


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