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G Deuce 04-07-04 09:25 PM

This is gonna be a close one but here it is

Big N
Creativity 7/10
flow 7/10
word usage 8/10
punchlines 7/10
total - 29

DP
Creativity 8/10
flow 7/10
word usage 8/10
punchlines 8/10
total - 31
It came down to the wire, but I believe DP won this one with her upperhand on her creativity with her words.

v-DP

Juss_Blaze 04-07-04 09:29 PM

hmmm...i see u have me up there. well i do have a battle goin on with you so... but are you a girl disaster? anyway i give this to disasner. Big'n made me laugh with some of his punches and i really liked the "I float over garbage mc's like Boats and Hovercrafts/" line. but disaster had a longer verse and more to draw from.

L.I. 04-07-04 09:30 PM

yo nice battle...
WELLL THE BREAKDOWN

Opener - Big...liked that short hand line alot...
Flow - Disaster...ya flow was really kickin up afta the 6th line and u took this category from there on...
Punches - Disaster...she had the bigger verse which gave more room for punches n she filled up that room with hot punches...
Personals - neither...no personals...
Vocab - Disaster...she had the better vocab in this one....
Multi's - Disaster....her closer's multi's beat your whole verses attempts at multis...she used a lot of hot multis...
Sustainment - Disaster...hers was hot from the 6th line through...Big urs fell off...need to werk on sustainment....
Closer - Disaster...hot closer with multi's...
Enjoyment - Disaster....hers was the better verse to read and i enjoyed it more...Big yours was more a chore to read....pretty boring...werk on personals, multis, and punches
vote - Disaster
ayo disaster illbe calling you out soon in bitch slapped within the next day...so be checkin in there!!!!
NICE SPIT

Juss_Blaze 04-07-04 09:31 PM

and let the mods know that that aint me you battlin, becuz i dont want an "L" on some bullshyt

Juss_Blaze 04-07-04 09:58 PM

yo change my fukkin name. it is showing up as losses on my screen. either change my name or end this thread and start over.

Big'N 04-07-04 10:05 PM

Yo I think disaster has to do it cuz I have no control over this thread.

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-08-04 04:36 PM

Aye Yo ' Upppppppppppppppppppppppin On This Shit'

And Can Some "Mod" Fix The Poll' I Have The Wrong Name In There' lol

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-08-04 04:57 PM

Uppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes On This Battle' .. Don't Sleep On This Shit!!

C'Mon Ya'll & Drop A Vote

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-08-04 05:18 PM

Upppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 Votes On This Shit' .. Don't Sleep On It

C'Mon Ya'll & Drop A Vote

Shadows edge 04-08-04 05:37 PM

I think the winner here is DP, the last couple bars really had me going, it was a good way to go out with the worldplay on "odds." Both were kinda weak though.. big'n you can't rhyme "cat" and "cat" ... especially when that's such an easy thing to rhyme man.

Both of you could work on the punches though... BigN had some ok ones, DP had some weak and some good. I've seen both you do better though.

Vote on mine.

PoLiFicK 04-08-04 05:47 PM

good battle let me get right 2 it
disaster-always feelin yo shitt yo shorty yo verses tight
structure-9/10
punches-8/10
vocab-9/10
flow-9/10
close-8/10
overall-9/10

big n
structure-8/10
punches-8/10
vocab-8/10
flow-9/10
close-8/10
overall-9/10

winner-disaster

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-08-04 05:57 PM

Lol' .. Shit Aint My Best Thats For Sure' ... But Didn't Really Think I Needed To Come Hard This Time Around.. And Thanx Choppa Appriciate The FeedBack :) ' ...

Appriciate The Honest Votes

Stillllll Uppppppppppppppppin On This SHit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 04-08-04 06:03 PM

Quit Sleepin On This Shit' ... & Drop Another Vote' Up In Here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Restricted 04-08-04 06:13 PM

Check It...

Big'N: 5/10
Punches Weren't Really Direct and Didnt Make Too Much Sense To Me. Flow Was off, Structure Was Horrible, and No Mulits and Metaphors. Elevate Kid.

DisasterPeice420: 6/10
Punches Were There, Not As Hard As Sum Other Ones, But The Flow and Structure Was Nice. Multis Weren't Really There and Metaphors Were Still Weak. Just Keep Elevating and Keep Droppin Dope Ish.

Vote - Disaster

~R~


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