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420 - good spit didnt ryme at some spots but had some sweet flow and good punches.
Best Line - Know Your Pumped Up Now, Your 'GayBoyFriend-Left',/ The Only 187 You Talking Bout Fucking His 'A$$-To-Death'/ Worst Line - none Eny - liked your shit it flowed well, close battle.. liked your punches and flow was alright. Best Line - My rhymes are Drastic, I'll take you to school, come get your Ass Kicked// I made the grade, she barely Passed It, I'm Ill enough to make her Class Sic// Worst Line - I'm Sayin, why's this bitch Beggin, she wants to Spit After Me// Beat the booty off this bitch? dawg.......I just Disassed Her..... Peace// OVERALL - I gotta give this to 420 cuz her flow was better, punches were almost even, and 420's multi's were better. Work on your flow E and step up on the multi's. Vote - 420 can you hit up this battle plz..http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118405 only need 2 more votes ofr the DQ. |
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This was a very very close battle. I really liked both of your verses.
Flo= You both had excellent flo in your pieces. I think that enygma gets this because a few of DP's lines didn't rhmye. Punches= You both did well here. But I thought DP hit a lot harder than Enygma here. Overall a very good battle, but in the end DP's verse was a little more enjoyable to me. So I vote for DP. Good drop by both. Keep droppin' both of you. |
This battle was close but this is how it goes down
Enygma structure 8/10 flow 7/10 punchlines 8/10 creativity 7/10 word usage 8/10 total - 38 D.P. (sorry, had to shorten it) structure 8/10 flow 7/10 punchlines 7/10 creativity 8/10 word usage 7/10 total - 37 Very, very close battle. BP would have had this one but she 'fell off' her creativity from the middle towards the end. Nice try though babygurl. Good and consistent flow, enygma. v - E Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
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ENYGMA- opener was great. im ill enough to make her class sick. nice punches throughout your whole verse. structure was okay but it had a good flow to it.
you had personals that was good thing. so it was hard to tell if this was prewritten your biggest problem is wordplay and multies. DISASTER PIECE- ppener passed for satisfactory. cuz it wasnt as personal. and there was a few mistakes on your typing which made it hard to understand at times. this tells me u rushed this. your structure i think was a lot better then enygmas and you had a few punches here and there. but u wasnt consistent throughout. I agree with what u said. you must of havent put much effort....cuz i seen better from u. v/enygma |
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ENYGMA- opener was great. im ill enough to make her class sick. nice punches throughout your whole verse. structure was okay but it had a good flow to it.
you had personals that was good thing. so it was hard to tell if this was prewritten your biggest problem is wordplay and multies. DISASTER PIECE- ppener passed for satisfactory. cuz it wasnt as personal. and there was a few mistakes on your typing which made it hard to understand at times. this tells me u rushed this. your structure i think was a lot better then enygmas and you had a few punches here and there. but u wasnt consistent throughout. I agree with what u said. you must of havent put much effort....cuz i seen better from u. v/enygma |
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My rhymes are Drastic, I'll take you to school, come get your Ass Kicked// I made the grade, she barely Passed It, I'm Ill enough to make her Class Sic// Okay nice multi's in it...u had a nice personal...and it was a decent punch 7/10 I Shatter And Bruse, called out Disaster cause I was sick of Battlin Newbs// I Had Her Confused, she must have thought I was just sick of Battlin Dudes// Okay another bar with nice multi's...punch was aihgt, it didnt hit too hard 6/10 I Burn Em Out, she's from ATL where they produce shit like Word Of Mouf// So Would You Please take some Summer's Eve and clean out that Dirty South// Nice punch, personal, and multi's 9/10 I Maul And Stompin Her, she'll need the police, go Call An Officer// Aw fuck...... Someone beat me to it, I came to beat the Balls Off Of Her// Ehh i didnt feel the punch, "balls off her"? i dont get it but u had nice multis again 4/10 Avi says Still Matic, but ya Skills Battered, Rappin? you should Stop Or Pause// Looks good on the pic, but said herself, In person she recieves Lots Of NAs// Nice personal, multis, and a hard hitting punch 10/10 I'm Sayin, why's this bitch Beggin, she wants to Spit After Me// Beat the booty off this bitch? dawg.......I just Disassed Her..... Peace// An ok closer not to hard hitting...decent 7/10 OVERALL YOU GOT A.... 43/60 Trying To Battle With That Weak A$$ Raps You "Bring-Through",/ The Only Ice In Your Life Is Cracking "Beneathe-You",/ Nice punch, some ok multis, pretty decent opener.... 6/10 Nobody Believes You, Cause You Admit I Got 'Game',/ Save Your Live, Back Off The Mic An Just Hang Your Head in 'Shame',/ Nice multis in there, hard hitting punch...was def feeling this bar 9/10No One To Blame Except Your Self For 'This-Shit',/ Picked A Fight With Tom Green And Got 'That-A$$-Whipped',/ (lol) I'm The Verbal Alpha-Rappa Dominating This Bitch,/ Nice punch with the tom green line i def liked that, ok multis in it...didnt help ya flow with the 3 lines that rhymed...fucked up there 6/10 Pt The Rock Down For A Minute And See,/ My Flows Burn You Worse Than Your 'Venerial-Disease',/ This line was an ok punch, no multis....5/10 You Damn Right I'm Sick, But You Just 'Got-Fucked',/ My Disease Is In My Head, And Your's In 'Your-Butt',/ Not really a hard hitting punch...ur verse is starting to fall off 4/10 I Know Your Pumped Up Now, Your 'GayBoyFriend-Left',/ The Only 187 You Talking Bout Fucking His 'A$$-To-Death'/ lol nice punch this helped your sustainment...10/10 You Can't Defeat This, Better Call A 'Mountie-You-Bitch',/ This Real Americana Mofioso Pimp 'Slappin-You-Trick',/ (LoL) Nice hard hitting punch...8/10\ Damn It Seem Like You "Burnt-YourSelf-Again",/ I Got More Green In My Name, Than Your "Life-Ever-Did",/ Ok closer...u needed a hotter one to take the battle....5/10 OVERALL YOU VERSE TALLEYS UP AS... 53/80 My vote goes to enygma for a harder verse....disaster u didnt come as hard as u usually do n thats why you didnt get the win....nice battle tho... no hate just a vote, nice spits yall :thumbup: |
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i was feeling ur lines more structure and flow was strong vocab and personals were really good punchlines i thought they were really strong thats which got u the win 9/10 L.I.: structure and flow was pretty good vocab and personals were ok not that strong punchlines wern't that great 8/10 My Vote: DisasterPeice420 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe |
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