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Alright JPoll!!!!!!!! I'll Hit You Up With Some FeedBack On Your Verse & Yes I Did Read It' lol Was A Bit Whack & Dis-Organized!! But Let Me Break It Down To You!!
Check JPoll's Lines: I’m too much to handle, you’re socks with sandles, I’m a blast in chernobyl, you’re just a candle, ^^Alright Multies! Wheres The Punch? Not A Good Opener!! 4/10 This is pointless, you’re jointless, you can’t even bend, It’s almost like you’ve got arthritis, in your pen ^^Alright There Is A Decent Bar & A Good Punch!! Nice, Playa 8/10 You’re poor and hungry, while I’m in my sauna, If people where countries, you’d be Botswana, ^^Im Saying WTF?? 2/10 Something went wrong with you, when, I’m not sure, Maybe back when there turned into thurr, ^^Shit Went Off Line There Fixx It Up 2/10 Wrapped up in yourself like you’re practicing yoga, Kids all yelling boo, like it was the end of Octobah. ^^A Good Closer' Better Then Most Of Your Lines..!! But Yet Again Wheres The "Punch" ....!! 6/10 I Thought You Could Have Done Alot Better!!!! Work On Your Skills' .. EveryBody Has Something That They Can Get Better At.. I Wasnt Feeling Your Flow Though!!' .. So I Had To Give It To CarsonJet!!!!! ... I Mean You Had A Nice Structure But Something Went Wrong In Your Verse!!!!' ..... Evelate Kiid!!! ... There Is My Advice To You!!' .. SInce You Were Looking Forward To It!!! ... (No Disrespect) You Had Some Clean Lines In Your Verse' . But Not Many!! |
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your down 2-0...... |
okay let me explain the punch is he's be like botswana cause they were rated the worst country to live in the world...saying he's wack
second his shit we wrong when there turned to thurr cause that's when rap got wack with all that nelly and ja and chingy bull shit third the punch at the end was tight,,, saying all the kids boo him...like saying boo with the other meaning at halloween...do you get what i'm saying...think about shit people write when he's just talking simple shit...no my game is elevated |
Uppppppppppppppppin This Shit For My Boi's
CarsonJet & JPoll Ya'll Drop Some Honest Votes On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!! ' ' ' ... |
My Vote
ok ok bar by bar breadkown...
JPoll, Scar'd from birth now u spitin wit no net'worth... for what it's worth...you aint the first, 38 came before your merk.... Nice opener...hot multi's...good little punch...9/10 Got u beggin for thirst, way ya need ta feed off my verse' aint gotta come hard...n still sideline this herb like Garrison Hearst... Another hot bar with nice multi's and a hard hitting punch...also nice meta..9/10 Cus you's a tourists here, I mean dawg look at you... What u call the streets...I call 5th Avenue... Nice punch....7/10 It's simple arithmatic, 5-0 poll no J cus I simply ripped da bitch... An I lay low wit plastic hips..Merked by my best minus 4/5ths.... Nice personal...hard hitting punch...nice multi's...10/10 I know's ya style, your probly gonna wanna speak bout all ya guns... which ones? I kno...every cracker's dream of holdin Ak's an 8 plus 1's... Nice closer...hard hitting punch...9/10 Score... 44/50 Ok carson...not really much advice needed...all i suggest is using more personals....nice spit...enjoyed it....keep droppin.... I’m too much to handle, you’re socks with sandles, I’m a blast in chernobyl, you’re just a candle, Ok...u had some multis..boring punches though..5/10 I’m a high speed roadster that’s too fast for sight, You’re just a toaster set on light, Ehh toaster...boring punch...plus flow was off on that...4/10 This is pointless, you’re jointless, you can’t even bend, It’s almost like you’ve got arthritis, in your pen, ok punch...nice multi's...6/10 You’re poor and hungry, while I’m in my sauna, If people where countries, you’d be Botswana, boring punches...3/10 Something went wrong with you, when, I’m not sure, Maybe back when there turned into thurr, Ehh doesnt really make sense...2/10 Wrapped up in yourself like you’re practicing yoga, Kids all yelling boo, like it was the end of Octobah. Ok decent punch...nice closer...7/10 Score... 27/50 ok...first off work on using personals....ur pretty straight in the multi category...werk on direct punches....personals will help with getting direct punches....stick wit people on ya own level....keep elevatin kid...ull get better Vote - Carson return the favor in my topical with violatin-to-va....crew votes r allowed... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118924 by the way im not gonna poll my vote on here until i figure out if crew votes r allowed in this battle.....are they?? |
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nobody cares....... dont write lines that arent self explanatory....you suck anyways... nobody knows the worste rated country off the top of there head... so you pre=wrote...which makes sense cus u didnt have one personal.... so u made me spit first....and dropped a copy an paste.... see what happens when u keep complainin? shit gets deeper.... keep opening your mouth....-pc-1 |
It Just Says "Normal Rules" So I Would Guess Crew Votes Are Allowed
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whatever all the guys are probably in your "crew"
weak shit...hey and get some education and you'll things like that kid |
crew votes should never be allowed that's weak...it's totally biased...how about we get some one in here with more than a gr 9 education to vote
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Lmfao' .. Im "NOT" Even In Carson's Crew DumbA$$' ....
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uppin for votes..please no crew votes...............yadig.... and think about the verses
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uppin for votes everyone....
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uppin vote on this you guys...shits decent ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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I would honestly give this one to JPoll. it was funny and creative. i actually laughed out loud for some of his lines. like when he said if people were countries Carson would be botswana. that was classic. and the closer was good. how he rhymed its ova with the last 2 lines. not hatin on the vet, but i have to gove this one to the rook. maybe carson better step his game up. especially since he has a battle with the Blaze.
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Jpoll: i'm not voting, i respect if you dont want crew votes. its like this though.. i see where your coming from.. im a white boy, i have an education, im in college, etc
but this isn't fucking english class, its not poetry open mic night. its a battle.. supposed to pack witty, punch hits in little sentences, not fucking prosaic epics. get it? |
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