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i agree....but he's in my crew so its all good....but it is true...sorry LI |
Alright Let Me Break This Shit down!!! No Bull-Shit!!
Check Carson's Lines: This kid's 14!...He went ta rent LionKing an still got carded.. Born wit Failures....You had L.'s in your name before you even started ^ Very Nice Opener!!' ... With A Good Punch... 9/10 you see? If you wanna hold respect, dawg stick wit your topicals... Cus stickin wit jet's like u makin vet..the shit's simply impossible... ^Again Droppin Decent Bars' .. With Good Punches' ... 10/10 LI or AI, drop 1 to the head an 4 in the mesh, just to stain ya dress... Don't sweat....its jus the net... You can alway's jus Hide ya Rec..an keep on claimin..."not to test" ^^Structure Fell Off Long' .. And that Fucked Up Your Flow/Verse!!! 8/10 OverAll It Was A Nice Verse I Enjoyed It' .. Work On Structre And Verse Though!!' ...(Advice To You) Alright Check L.I.'s Lines: Cocky attitude needs to be checked...cuz it has him losing respect.... Could have Sherlock Holmes detect...hed say u have a loss to expect.. ^Great Opener' .. And Nice Multie In There Also!!! .. 10/10 Records 36-10 thats good and all...only have it cuz u take newbies to brawl... My record next to yours looks small...But lets check your opponent recall... ^Nice Punchline' ...!! 9/10 L.I.'s career he be takin?....haha come on u must be mistaken... Wit lines "wacker" than masterbation...suggest u stick to sig makin... ^Very Nice Closer' .... & Punchline With Good Use Of Multies In There' .. 10/10 OverAll' .. I Also Enjoyed Your Verse' .. And It Was Very Nice Structured & It Flowed & Went Together Nice!!!' ....!! :) Vote: L.I. |
ok uppin for that final vote........get that ish explained....................
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L.I. - it was a good as flow homie u came right at yo opponent i was diggin dat u had some tight multis and wordplay
u didnt really have a woste line in my opinon u had all god shit Carson - u had some hot shit also u came right at LI as well good job. fav line - you see? If you wanna hold respect, dawg stick wit your topicals... Cus stickin wit jet's like u makin vet..the shit's simply impossible... Worst Line - You can alway's jus Hide ya Rec..an keep on claimin..."not to test but in da end punches-jet vocab-LI flow-LI structure-jet multis-LI closing-LI beggining-LI" vote LI |
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