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supreme took this one had a good flow and some hard punchz and good structure wit a couple of good personalz
best linez $$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX* I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX* clorox i didnt see much in this battle linez were real short and weak punchz when u had em get some worplay an stretch ya linez out a lil bit best linez ..........money signs in your name? thats a weird a occurence, you could have had a heart, but you couldnt afford insurence............ vote/supreme vote on my shit |
easily won by $$umpreme, ol dude, eww, sucky ass structure
$$ had great punches $$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX* I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX* like that one PORNSTAR? NAW, BUT YOU CAN SUCK ME RIGHT* OBEY-YOUR-THIRST U CUM SUCKING BITCH AND I AINT TALKING BOUT SPRITE* and that one V/ Defently $$upreme return honest favs, like here: Nephew J vs Lil Nae2 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117337 |
Thanks.....
Much Luv....... Uppin 4 Votes>>>>>>>>>>>>>> |
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Breakdown homies:
$$UPREME: Nice opener. You had a very good structure which keep your rhyme nice and solid, nice clean flow. You had the better Punchlines also, plus your personly's were on the spot: "$$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX* I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX*" Thats the punch and personly's I'm talking about, I felt that this was one of your best. You came at him at the end, defending youself also, nice flow. Chalk: Your structure was very weak and all of your rhymes were basic. Get at him with more Personly's and punches. You had some punches but I felt that $$UPREME had better ones. I was feelin' your vocab and flow, just work on your punches and personly's. VOTE: $$UPREME. return da favor: Oc6 The Caustic VS spitfire. |
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Don't Use All That Fancy Text Shit' Fucks Up Your Flow!!.. Like Red & Black.. .. Lol DAMN
And I Can't Vote Here.. No Crew Votes' ... |
chalk clorox you still want a rematch,............$$$
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Flow. punches, structure, vocab, rhymin was all done betta by $$upreme
Chalk ur shit was jus plain weak n' ha nuttin to it My vote goes to $$UPREME |
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