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Envy Styles 04-15-04 02:09 PM

Edge Came Harder, His punches Hit, And Had Ok Personals, Wordplay Was Decent, Flow Was Good, STructure Could Be Better Though. This was A Long Battle, I Excepted More, Frachize Came Weak, Some PUnches Hit, Ok Flow, Bad Wordplay, No Personals That Made Me Impressed, Vote Edge

I'll Poll my Vote After YOu Vote HERe

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119363

Shadows edge 04-15-04 03:25 PM

aight i voted man.. uppin for votes dont sleep on this people. drop a link and i will vote honest.

Sten. Cell 04-15-04 04:03 PM

Breakdown:
Punches: Shadow
Metas: Shadow
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Flow: Shadow
Disses: Shadow

Overall-This Battle Was One-Sided.Shadow Took This One With Stronger Punches And More Complexity.He Also Had Better Flow & Disses.His Opening Was Tight & His Ending Was Nice Too.He Had A Few Flaws With His Flow & Punch Delivery.Some His Lines Were A Lil Weak Too But He Still Takes This One.Franchize's Verse Had Too Many Fillers And Weak Punches.He Had A Choppy Flow And In Some Parts He Seemed To Be Just Talking.He Needed To Focus More On His Opponent Then Himself.

Vote-Shadows edge

Shadows edge 04-15-04 05:48 PM

3-0 .......... drop a link, I'll give an honest vote.

Shadows edge 04-15-04 07:41 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Shadows edge
3-0 .......... drop a link, I'll give an honest vote.


again ...

franchiZe 04-15-04 08:05 PM

come on lets get sum more votes on this battle

drop a link and i'll vote 4 ure battles
franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 1-3 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-4 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

E Looch 04-15-04 10:03 PM

damn uppin this battle a shit load and a shit load of lines 2 but check it

shadows edge had a good opener and closer but the middle wasnt that good but you had some solid punchs threw it and you had a good flow to it

franchizzy lol had some good punchs in there 2 just inconsitent with them like the other 1 said focus on your opponent find shit about him 2 use against him more

vote shadows edge barely

good battle

M&rk 04-15-04 11:12 PM

shadows edge take this, das sum good shit, but your finisher coulda been better if u said sumin bout food groups cuz dat fruit group was dumb and off set the good line before it. st8 up good shit tho real nice punches

other cat take notes on how he did dem punches. take everyday things and use wordplay makin 'em punchlines das dat ticket. hah. but gyeah do that

like these two by dat guy

Only punch you ever stomached was Hi-C fruity
Your punches couldn’t deliver if they was Dominoes

das how ya do it on here.

vote-shadow

yo dis my second battle i voted of your franchise hit up my battles


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