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my vote is Mixxed MC ...... ..... ....
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say maad stuff so i can vote already!asdjhsadfjlsahfasjdfhasfasf
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break down forpicture perfect 2
ryhmes: 6/10 style 6/10 flow/8/10 punches 7/10 total 27/40 breakdown for mixxed mc rymes 7/10 style 7/10 flow 8/10 punches 7/10 your best line: by the way the color of ya moms panties is blue//nigga u think u sick but i can make this picture perfect 2// madd propz u beat his ass my vote goes to mixxed |
yo i cant vote son how da hell do i vote somebody tell me
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Tellin da truth i think mixxed MC won dat battle cause he had bettah rhymes n junk maad props to Picture perfect doe holla at me
Vote:Mixxed MC |
is there anybody else even lookin at dis shink riight now? come on i wanna vote already
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ok, its like this. when your writing your verse, try rapping it. now if you are like me, this might not help. at least try to read it with a bit of a beat... you can tell if it has flow. now its ok to gow out of flow occasionally, if you pack a moster punch or something. but pp2, you were going over a line, and doing just generic disses. that's not gonna fly.
mixed mc: your verse was far from tight, but you got this battle. for instance the line where you said "by the way your moms panties is blue" or whatever.. that was a weak line, it seemed like you somehow couldn't rhyme "2" (... few, through, crew, you, threw, do, due, stew...). it could have been a nice punch if you did something original with it... both of y'all need to elevate. |
a yo my nigga mixxed mc definetly took dat wut da fuk was u thinkin pictureperfect i wasnt feelin dat flow of urs n u punches wasweak as fuk
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picture ure flow was off in this spit and ure structure had room for improvement. it was like u were concentratin on sumthin else cuz ure spit just didnt work. ure punches were off and they didnt connect at all, u need to elevate and concentrate on ure battles if u hope 2 win. mixxed mc ure shit was aight but u two cud think about elevatin. ure flow was top draw and ure punches were mostly average with sum gud ones in there but they did connect. Overall i give this one to Mixxed MC cuz he just had more rhythm and punches wit his spit. VOTE - MIXXED MC
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