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East Miles 04-17-04 03:16 PM

Okay you dick Only your dr freinds know this because only lames listen to Fat joe. Punk Bitch and who the fuck you calling an idiot with your 75 IQ.

JPoll 04-17-04 03:17 PM

my 75 iq...i'm in university taking engineering...haha and you're in the disease...haha...have fun with that....and i listen to all rap...but thanks, how can you know what you like if you don't try it all?

JPoll 04-17-04 03:18 PM

by the way i got a 1300 on my sat's ....haha did you even take your sat's? haha

East Miles 04-17-04 03:18 PM

If you really wanna see my raw form set another battle faggot. But I won't expect you to since you know I'll fucken rip you limb for limb if WE BATTLE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

franchiZe 04-17-04 03:19 PM

ok let me get into this

JPOLL
ure performance was average u can do better, tha spit u hit me wiv was far better.
ure flow and structure was on and u came wit a couple of nice punches. not much 4 originality but still u had gud vocabs.
OVERALL - 6/10

EAST MILES
first off i know u ripped that fat joe line
ure performance was not gud at all, ure flow was just about ok but ure structure was wack. ure punches were all weak and didn't really do any damage to JPoll. u really need to elevate ure game if u hope to win any battles cuz ure spit will get u nuthin but losses, ure a newb so its aight tho, just remember, use multis and hit wiv gud strong personals
OVERALL - 4/10
Vote = JPoll

Vote on my battles playas......honestly
franchiZe 1-3 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 4-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335
mic-wrecker 0-0 franchiZe
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119505
franchiZe 0-1 creaTivitie
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119662

JPoll 04-17-04 03:19 PM

haha.....what you'll copy and paste from another pro rappers lyrics page...haha that's the only way you'd ever beat me

East Miles 04-17-04 03:21 PM

Man you really get under my fucken skin you sarcastic bastard.............

East Miles 04-17-04 03:22 PM

Just set it up and I'll knock'em down faggot!! LOL

JPoll 04-17-04 03:22 PM

oh sorry...you need a tissue....so it's look like i'm going to KO you..................and no after this battle is done being voted on i would like to rape your ass lyrically again...haha maybe i should try this time

East Miles 04-17-04 03:25 PM

Yeah keep talking go ahead N try to get another win from the Rook. Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You make me laugh with joy.

JPoll 04-17-04 03:27 PM

okay when this battle is done...i'll set it up ....you think that your ready....seriously?

East Miles 04-17-04 03:27 PM

If you really want it come N get anouther win You wannabe rapper. I'll love nothing better to Get you again..............

JPoll 04-17-04 03:29 PM

to get me again? i wrote that as i was typing it ...and i still killed you...haha...you wannabe gangsta;///haha no skilled punk

East Miles 04-17-04 03:29 PM

I look forward to gettin at you N since I was beatin I spit first and allow you to evaluate my " Biting ass lyrics"

Shadows edge 04-17-04 03:30 PM

hey yo I got a 1600 on my SATs and nobody cares because it doesn't matter, so how about less trash talking by everyone.

its like this. East: Your battles are weak as fuck. Your flow is really poor, the split line deal doesn't work at all, your lines don't really rhyme and your punches are all played and not original at all. you have to work on your vocab, multis, flow and get creative. also, get some personal punches in there, instead of just talking about your guns and what not.

check this, by JPoll:

"First off east miles, you can't kill me cause we're both online,
If you're so hard why u in front of ur comp, you should be commitin a crime,

It's friday night n ur a g?, if u where u wouldn't be text fightin,
I'm wrecking you as hard as holyfield did tyson, but you keep bittin,"

see that shit, he got a personal in there and straight up punches, nice wordplay and everything. not a perfect verse, but he easily took this battle.

East Miles, evelate.

hit back my battles, honest votes and well explained votes only.


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