hey, i' m bout to drop a vote..so both yall should hit up this battle.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119513

I'll give you some food for thought.//
You think you're gangsta because of all the " Clas sic" shoes you brought?!!//

i liked that line and this line...

In this battle I'm gonna shine.... Take your time...N evaluate my rymes.... Because its gonna take all of your 21 wins combined.... to even come up with a respectable line//

those were both good personals...and that last you had good use of multies...i wasn't really feelin the rest of the verse tho..it seemed like it was mostly filler...

now onto you....accomp...you had some good lines..here are the ones i liked...mold kids with verbal skills, thats why east becomes my hand-made-fan.../
wit a knife at hand, leave him wit so many cuts he could sponsor band-aid-brand.../

that was the best one in my oppinion...okay use of multies...okay personal...and good punch...over all your verse was decent...i thought it flowed better than than east miles....but...i really dont like a whole lotta gangsta talk...you both had kinda violent verses..and thats cool if you keep it minimal...accomp...you didn't...sorry...east gets my vote...to be honest...i think you both need to elevate...but maybe this just wasn't a good battle for either of you

1 up dogg lets go ................................

reason nobody voting is because they're sick of you free posting on their battles without dropping votes.

that said, check it.. tight battle. east, you definetely elevated *a lot* since your other battles.

the same lines wildfire quoted, those were very good, best two bars of the battle i think, brought the hard punches and personals. the problem was that the rest of your verse still had problems with flow, structure, and really had no good punches. concentrate on getting more quality punches, less filler.

accomp, pretty ok verse, certainly not the best i've seen from you. the first couple bars were pretty bad, but your last 5 were all really good. you had basically the same personal through most of them.. "fake thug", but you did it well in each line you dropped it. the play on his name was a good punch even though the flow wasn't great. the closer was mediocre, but those other bars and the consistency were enough for accomp to take the battle.

hit back on my battles, honest and explained votes only.

I want to battle. Are you up to the Challege? If not thats cool. I'll talk to someone else

mission accomplished
 

accomplishment ripped this kid.. his verse was weak i thought.. than again i havent seen anything real strong yet...

this looks like a knock out round

East – bit weak man(whats going on)
Flow – easy reader, good flow
Punches – good opener, but that Porshe line killed it
Personal – some of them were ok, but over all very untrained
Metis – there wasn’t much, ya attempts were weak
All and all – probably ya weakest drop that I have seen – 4/10

Accom – nice I liked it
Flow – very very good, u kept it going, was feeling it
Punches – nice, ya had every line rigged with one, all worth it
Personal – also had “DVD” nice, plus name personalsBONUS
Meti’s – normally that’s the hard one, but ya had it under control
All and all – I have no advice, only a score – 7/10

Best line:
“Fuck what ya say small town boi, claim detroit what he reps...
like da bitch is a mile, he barely fifty steps”

Vote: Accomplishment

aight uppin dis shit

uup

dont sleep on dis penial units

east...you had a good verse, you had good punches, some personals, decent vocab, but your flow was off, an structure needed work, needed some wordplay, an you had no multies in verse
Accomplish...good shit, nice punches, good personals, solid multies, some wordplay, solid vocab, great flow an structure, an creativity was a plus
Vote: Accomplish

upppin for votes yo

comon you pajama mother fuckers droppa vote on dis shit

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuup for votes mofuckers

miles- overall not that good didnt stand out much
punchs- the only good punch you had was the opener didnt see mch of anythang else that mad eme say damn
flow-good flow bout the best thing you had in this battle
multies-none need to work more in your flows

accomplishment-overall good verse nice drop
punchs-had plenty they stayed consisitent good about focusin on your opponent
flow-good flow wasnt all choppy like most peoples are on here
multies-had some multies when you needed them didnt force any in that didnt make since

vote accomplishment