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L.I. 04-18-04 09:27 PM

whoops i sent that to quickly...ok vote goes to choppa for sustaining 2 verses with 2 hot verses....afterword ur 2nd verse was hot but ur 1st one didnt help u.....so sorry but choppa gets it...nice drops by both tho

PoLiFicK 04-18-04 09:29 PM

thanx 4 da honest vote man thats a well explained vote uppin 4 votes

Afterword 04-19-04 01:01 AM

yo we appreciate the comments
lets keep the polls cummin
uppin

Gh0St MC 04-19-04 01:32 AM

Chopper-city killed dat i gotta give it to chopper city but, give props 2 afterword


My Vote: Chopper-city

PoLiFicK 04-19-04 08:37 PM

^^^^ uppin 4 votes .................................................. ..

Afterword 04-19-04 10:36 PM

yo wuts up with explainin ya votes?
it dont take long if u are a emcee(which i presume we all are)
very simple if you know wut to look for
but ne way
uppin
and ill hit yall wit some honest votes
peace

Diagnose 04-20-04 05:04 PM

wut he sed

FIRST BATTLE
Choppa - you had an ok flow...stretched lines at times but for the most part ur flow was good....u had sum nice punches and sum decent ones....no really horrible ones....you didnt really have ne multis....but a nice verse overall

Best Line/Bar...
betta off goin 2 hiphoptalk and making a problem......
then after they answer they trip on yo wins column.....

Worst Line/Bar...
5 votes easly took,have afterspeechless and shook,he prolly still wont win a battle if stevie wonder decided 2 take a look.......

Afterword - u had good multis...punches were aight....flow was off b/c of stretched lines....nice lil personal in there...actually a couple....decent verse overall...

Best Line/Bar...
yo thanx a lot for stopin in, I know u are very busy making the band on MTV
but seriously stop wathin them, make a stand, and get ur own IDENTITY

Worst Line/Bar...
im not even an impressive battle rapper, but i manage wit raw talent
u an unconvincing actor-rapper thats over-dressing like tossin a salad

SECOND BATTLE
Afterword - this verse was alot better than your first....u had good multi's...hard hitting punches....and a nice flow....

Best Line/Bar...
hot lines no doubt you speak a few, but i doubt that u created'em
you bite from guys u listen too, misconscrue their view and update'em

Worst Line/Bar...
NONE

Choppa - good sustainment in this verse...started off well...finished off well...strong punches....a lil bit messed up flow in the middle....ok multis....nice verse....

Best Line/Bar...
shouldnt even need a verse his words a be my best diss.......
im goin on 10-2 y dis bitch goin still be winliss.......

Worst Line/Bar...
comin wit wack lyrics ill slit his throat,a deaf person a tell AFTER i dont wanna hear his WORDS nomo.....

Vc 04-21-04 01:20 PM

It's some conspiracy shit going on here. choppa city always get a shit of vote right after teh abttle.. liek he did with me and i notice with 3 other emcees....it's some cheatin asss abstards...

but anyway i gotta give my vote to afterwords....

even tho i have seen afterwords come ahrder he didnt come as hard as i thought he would...but he still won this battle.. his mutlis were nice easy to read concised wordplay and structure... chopppa came real aight too...(cheating bastard)....but even so i sitll woudlve given this battle to afterwords.....

PoLiFicK 04-21-04 04:10 PM

cheating^^ u cant be serious i jus merked yo ass pimp ahahahahah da 1s u murder da 1s wanan hate on u

^^^ uppin 4 votes

streetsweepa 04-21-04 04:28 PM

choppa
str 10/10
voc 10/10
flow 10/10
ovall 10/10
your bets line:5 votes easly took,have afterspeechless and shook,he prolly still wont win a battle if stevie wonder decided 2 take a look.......
thats sweet
aftaworld nice
stru 10/10
flow 9/10
voca10/10
ovall 9/10
my vote goes to choppa


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