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Wulf 04-18-04 09:48 PM

Spitfire...i've never seen a battle verse that long..and its uncalled for

FLOW: DeNounced had this one easy, it was a lil more complex then yours and well he kept a struture through out...Spit your flow was also on point but it got played out because of the lack of complexity

Vocab: I'd give this one to Spit he looked in his dictionary a lil more nuff said

Punchs: great punchs on both parties but what really hurt spit was the fact that he didn't keep his punchs hard through out his whole verse he came strong but die fast

This Controversy your rhymes cant-hurt-me,you spit fire?,chea...whos chain are you jerking-
This kids an easy merking,try and flip the scripts but your burning,why'd your mom do it...you werent worth-birthing-

^heh

Overall: i'm giveing this one to DeNounced, next time spit if your going to spit so many bars make sure they carry the fire all the way through with out so many fuller lines...i think thats what hurtcha the most in this battle

VOTE DeNounced

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119690

spitfire-+ 04-18-04 09:53 PM

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww uppin dem votes

franchiZe 04-18-04 10:14 PM

right this battle was tight with both playas puttin out an aight spit
both had sum gud hard punches which i like to see in a battle but i was feelin spit more and i think he got better connection wit his punches. both used sum gud vocab in there but once again i give it to spit on that one ure flow and structure was on both of u but denounced probably was a little better. i agree wit Wulf and that the only thing that spit had wrong was the shit was too long, u shud keep tha shit short and sweet and if ure gonna drag it out make it count. Still tho i'm gonna have to give my vote to Spit cuz i think he put up a slightly better overall performance.
Vote - Spit

spitfire-+ 04-18-04 10:52 PM

upppppppin dem votessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

DeNounced 04-18-04 11:25 PM

Pfft..better performance?...you said my verse was better in the explanation then voted for him...aight..opinions opinions...its all good...

more votes....

spitfire-+ 04-19-04 12:17 AM

uppin dem vottttttttttttttttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeessssssss

Visionz 04-19-04 12:23 AM

First of all.

20 lines to his 10 aint gonna win it.

Denounced had better punches, simple as that.

Punches- Denounced.
Similies- Denounced.


Only 2 things that matter in a battle homie.

Vote- Denounced.

E Looch 04-19-04 12:28 AM

vocab-spitfire got this but if u spit an hour long flow it should have some vocab in it

punchs- both had good punchs but spit you did fall off on alot of punchs turned into fillers and denounced kept em comin at you so denounced gets this

wordplay-denounced had some good wordplay made his punchs hit harder

overall thank it was a wierd battle all that shit for 1 verse is unnecessary coulda made 2 out of that but i tank denounced came harder all around with consitent punchs but spit u are elvatin just keep practicin

vote denounced

Sten. Cell 04-19-04 12:41 AM

Breakdown:
Punches: De
Metas: De
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Flow: De
Disses: Tie

Overall-Tight Battle But Im Goin With Denounced On This One.The Best Parts Of His Verse Were The Opening & Ending.He Used A Few Good Metas & Had Some Good Punches Too.He Jus Needs To Work On His Complexity.Spitfire Did Have Some Good Punches But Not Enough To Win It.Also His Complexity Was Lacking A Bit.

Vote-Denounced

S@ndM@n 04-19-04 12:51 AM

Spitfire your flow did not rhyme E.Xhhaha im oscar the myer selling hot dogs,i leave your in da microwave smack u up so bad they just reported in blood cloggs\\
i quite dis is 2 easy,im getting tired of rhyming wit dummies expecially those that are gressy//
And Denounced had better punchez
vote-Denounced

DeNounced 04-19-04 01:37 AM

Hmm thats 5 votes but the poll only says 3 guys gotta use the poll...uppin

Gh0St MC 04-19-04 02:26 AM

I give dat to DeNounced but big props 2 spitfire

DeNounced 04-19-04 02:55 AM

one more vote people...please vote...just some words and a click...uppin...

and thanks for the votes guys...appreciated...

Real Thorough 04-19-04 11:37 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by DeNounced
This cats always startin the 'beef' but then cant handle the 'grill'-
This cats lackin the skills,the only way he'd 'drop' 'hot' is if he overdosed on E pills-
I always rape,pillage,and plunder,this cat was born to be under-
Leave you fried like frogs in summer,you lack more intellect than dumb and dumber-
levels higher then spitfire,when im done with you,youll be 'spittin through the wire'-


Ayo man, that niggih ate the fuck outta you kid with them bars, he gave bout 9 or 10 bars of slashes and scars. Ayo the punchlines speak fah they got damned self, and the meta's war real. I like that ish yo, thats REAL THOROUGH. :shoot:

Da Vinci 04-19-04 02:57 PM

Well Denouced takes this one, I didn't really expect to read a novel before I clicked to vote on this shit but oh well.

Spitfire I really was not a fan of every line startin with "you ......."
EX.

yo ass is wacker than dirt,so wack when i tell a joke to yah it seems to hurt\\
i wonder why i must be poping E pills,shyte u on da otha hand need"em so

ur drivin us as in da world all crazy,yo shyte is way outa proportion shyte u a bytch worser than 2 month yr old baby\\

you sesame street fucka gayer than bigg bird,i try to spell new things out to yah in tha dictionary but u didn't understand the words\\

u like premature ejeculation ,always says things at the wrong tyme an i burn it in replacement//
u a minor crackhead waitin 4sum rock,yo life is da wait yah mind it serves then u go outta stock//
you a run 4 da worlds money,be dat first dumass fool on network televison to fuck an bunny//

try to mix it up,

Denounced had better flow, and punches, I wasn't really feel'n spit's, it was to the point. Spit's was way to long, there are bar limits for a reason.

u straight up like jwanna-man don't know what sex u wanna be,1st u wanted


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