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JPoll 04-22-04 02:47 PM

so that vote was for me...atleast you could put my name....come on...i thought it was a decent battle...that guy didn't seem very happy with life...haha...uppin

virt 04-22-04 03:04 PM

man abebisi, your just mad you lost ur battle. don't hate

JPoll 04-22-04 03:12 PM

true look at adebisi's record...haha..................................... ..this kids a chump...our battle was tight...

virt 04-23-04 01:39 AM

ok upin

franchiZe 04-23-04 05:21 AM

my vote is goin to JPoll
that was a tight ass battle but phat one of ure main faults was u dragged ure lines on too long. ure punches were all good but had weak connections. u used gud vocabs but there was a couple of played lines in there. JPoll u put up a sick spit there and ure flow was cool. u used gud vocabs and ure punches were solid with pure connection. both of u dont need to elevate in my opinion cuz ure both sick but phat try to shorten ure lines a little!!

Vote - JPoll

STriniBonafide 04-23-04 05:42 AM

I vote for the da first guy. Honestly I dunno if those lines are played out cause I from Trinidad and I never heard them before. Anyways, I liked the metaphors although I find the similes were overused. The second guy did not have lines with as much punch although I 'preciated the mortal kombat ref since I am a video game freak.

Vote - first guy

DirtBoy69 04-23-04 10:30 AM

breakdown for phat mic:

flow:a little choppy in spots the spots that were on were good though 6/10

volcab:nice use better then average good job 7/10

punches:some nice punches orginal for the most part and pretty personal good job incorporating the forced words into the punches my fav line,"fool,grippin tools,i spit scriptures the only time u "DROPPIN SCIENCE" cuz u found "CHEMSITRY WAS TOO DIFFICULT"" funny 8/10

overall:21/30

breakdown for j-poll:

flow:choppy can't really say anything else just really choppy and not working for me 4/10

volcab:average nothing special 6/10

punches:nothing i see that hurt or hit on a personal level this was pretty much full of open ended disses and played topics props to showing up keep at it and you'll get better but this wasn't good enough to win this week 5/10

overall:15/30

vote--phat mic gets my vote

virt 04-23-04 11:17 AM

2-2 this is close, upin for them votes

JPoll 04-23-04 02:54 PM

uppin for votes...it's 2-2 people let's go...this was a real close battle......uppin

virt 04-23-04 06:23 PM

uppin for some vote over no show's

JPoll 04-24-04 10:04 PM

uppin uppin let's go people .................................................. ............

DirtBoy69 04-26-04 08:10 AM

still looking for votes kid that lost is complaining bout the way i ended this so uppin it

JPoll 04-26-04 11:11 PM

uppin it...i didn't lose actually cause it's a tie...what the hell were you thinking...your vote shouldn't even count...

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 04-27-04 12:00 AM

Jpoll won it he had more bats and better punches

Jpoll

Flow 7/10
Structure 8/10
Rhymes 7/10
metas 7/10
Punches 8/10
Multis 6/10
43/60

Phatmic

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 7/10
punches 6/10
metas7/10
Multis 6/10
38/60


VOTE GOES: JPOLL

guyver4mk 04-27-04 07:22 AM

This was a close battle.
Yall both had some good punches and nearly the same structure, so I can't really comment on that. Both ya flows were neat and consistant. Ya content was a bit weak in areas, but that can't be helped in some areas.
If I had to vote, I'd say JPoll, cos I liked readin his verse more. Mad props to Phat mic though.

Vote// JPoll


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