limited edition? we all know dis fella-suck,but when shots from dat beretta-buck //
make like "bugs bunny playin dice with daffy" u "bet-a-duck" //
^^^^^MY OPENER......let me explain da punch 4 u dunny


make like "bugs bunny playin dice with daffy" u "bet-a-duck" //
^^^^dat mean when i shoot at him he "BETa-DUCK" like bug playin dice with daffy....how u dont get dat

but i dont think ya vote counted aneway dunn...voter's pleez explain ya vote or it aint gon count

:shoot: :shoot:

^^^^^^get a real gun then come see stupid...........

MARV WON THIS SHIT
who eva kop dunns-cd's?,i dont wanna hear about da pump-he-squeeze //
his moms a hoe she always get "caught under-cover" like "dumb dt's" //
^^^^THIS LINE WAS FUNNY AS HELL
OVERALL MARV HAD BETTER FLOW, AND PUNCHES
ONLY LINE I REALLY LIKED FROM THE OTHER DUDE WAS THE OPENER
HE DID HAVE HOT PERSONALS, BUT I DONT THINK THEY HIT AS HARD

limited good battle perfect finish good flow
and structure u came strong till tha very
end keep it up and have more punchlines
amd multis

vote limited

^^^^^aight now i seen some non explained votes but dis shit is da worst lmaooooo 4 real and dogg y da fukk did u pm askin me da vote on your after u did dis..its nothin tho u gon get banned in a minute

MARV, i've seen u do alot better my nukka, but it's str8 i guess. limited, i've never seen u, but i thought ur shit was pretty funny, which is what i try to incorporate into my steeze. people laughin = :thumbup:

i was lovin limit's shit like -
"No...I ain' a vet...but already have taken the entire net
I will win, wanna bet? No mystery when you don't have 3 wins yet"
^funny
but nothing else besides fluidity and structure.

MARV's ish was -
"limited edition? we all dis fella-suck,but when shots from dat beretta-buck //
make like "bugs bunny playin dice with daffy" u "bet-a-duck" //"
i think the other punches shoulda been set up better, that the only thing u need to work on dog, other than that, ur game's pretty tight.

i really do'nt know who to give it to, i love ppl who can keep it fun in their words, but marv's shit was pretty slick. oh fuck it, MARV gets the win, next time limited, fill up the bars, i would of voted for u if there was more to read.

VOTE-MARV