franchise...

If ure crew was the ‘Enterprise’ I’d be fuckin ‘Captain Kirk’//
I cud be considered OutKast cuz my shit is ‘So Fresh & So Clean’// (OutKast song)
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played out, both lines....

i couldnt really find any outstanding lines in ya verse an i think u need to be more creative n elevate alot more.....

killah...

You callin' the police?...........Lines will beat you down like Rodney King......./
Don't watch TV.........Rhymes'll pop through ya Television like-the-ring......../
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another nice opener....

Ya rhymes is gay.....take the win beat ya ass throw you back in the closet.../
you gonna pay......Kill you slowly snatch ya wallet and take ya bank deposit
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another nice finisher...

i think those 2 punches alone took this battle..overall better verse from killah...

vote=killah bwoy...