aight..well lostchild...u had some flow..but ur rhyme scheme is basic...just AA,BB..etc. u need to use some multies...n i didnt think ur punches were hard hitting..but the last line was pretty funny...bout bein scared when i drink whiskey that was a good way to use ur opponents name..good personal...

whiskey...ur whole verse was about peter pan..i think that is gay...even if u had one reference in ur verse to peter pan,it would still be gay,c'mon now,what are u ,michael jackson or something? nothin stood out to me,n i think u were tryna feed off the other dude's verse..so

vote=lostchild

Heh, aiight, thanks kitten. Looks like this is gonna be a whitewash. Nice work Lost.

This was a lopsided battle. Lost Child had the wordplay and the punches, I can't really see why anyone would expect me to go into anymore detail with this. He actually dissed his opponent. Whiskey just like, flowed. It was like reading a newspaper.

vote
Lost Child

Ayo.
LostChild you're like a child in a store lost,
Cryin' his head off, pissin' in his shorts.
You lost boy, come take a drink of this Whiskey,
and see if you find Never Never Land again so quickly.
If I clap my hands I'll kill fairies.
Shit, it didn't work, you're still standing.
I'll find and end you like your name was Peter Pan,
and I'm James Hook, flippin' you off with my good hand.
Well you know what they say? All's good that ends well.
You've blown your load kid, so get your dick outta Tinkerbell.

weak verse but you didnt cheat to get votes botto mline why you get my vote you need to elevate on voca creativite all your shti was played out when rip van winkle grew up and work on harder punchs to man those woundt dent paper just elevate

Lost child had this battle won.. due to his good wordplay along with the punches.. the punches hit hard against the enemy.. the flow helped it a bit..

Whiskey had a good structure but a lack of good wordplay and punches

vote=lost