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uppin 4 votes
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God but it this way can you imagine rapping to your verse online i`m not a TEXTCEEE i`m a real rapper so i keep my pucnhes and flow level w/e upin... if this was the new rb i would be killing alll these n00bs
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And Tenken on your last there say i`m done with "Toon" . . what the fuck you on about
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yo, its simple, vote on my battle straight up, and I'll vote on this one,,
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120615 and I up'd this shit fo ya |
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this kids chances of winnin are "long" like "Jay Leno's Chin"//
his level compared to mine is "gapped" bigger then Morpheus & "David Letterman"// ok... "change of winning" punches are getting played.. not a great opener.. morpheus and david letterman have nothing to do with each other i got this guy eatin "jello" outta my hand like "Bill Cosby"// He on da show "Kids say the darnest things" he replied "i fucked my mommy"// wtf does jello have to do with this? that second line was ok, but try to relate the two lines together somewhat This guy claims hes a "Flyweight" juss because hes free postin// i "fried" & "barb'ed" this "chicken" after he was done "Roastin"// the first line made very little sense, the second line is meh What this guy thinkin he aint no "Phantom of the Opera"// he juss a "mask on display" in the "Marine Worlds Aqua"// right.... *POW!!* now this nigga studdering worse than "Elmer Fudd"// Im done wit this "toon" *splash* "i wash my hands of this kids Blood"// probably your best line, but not that impressive Remarks of talent , i`m ill against me? - dont ever risk it . . Your nobody to me ... so i dont need to wish you NEVER Exsisted. pretty ok punch, nice rhyme. U dope? Nah... Reaching skill? well it`s not that i dout you. but how am i gonna battle you , when i dont know shit about you. i tihnk i've seen that punch before... I`ll rape this kid , sit back & Watch I could be michael jackson. I`ll have you saying " MM is the best" - because of my vital actions. the micheal jackson line is whack.. the second line.. meh You calling me wack ? think fast . . let me remind this fool. he pm`s me and its like.... " what do think of these lines dude" nice, nice personal but its kinda played... Want to make cash in the game ?... only way is if you bet , I WIN. & i`ll make a whole in chest , so big sadam could Hide In. very nice first line, second line is pretty ok I would only feed of you , not for skill but if i was starving . . I`m the bomb & my skill will never be caught like osma binlardin. decent closer, the feed off you line could have been worded better ok so overall.. I wasn't feeling tenken at all.. man you gotta take those concepts and metahs and turn them into hard hitting punches.. alot of yours were just whack. v/ mm hit back my battle against killah.... |
bad ass battle yo this one goes to MM for hot punches and continous flow tenken was tight too but flow lacked in some place anyways return da fave
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Tenken- Alot of played linez....but wordplay was aight...personals could being done betta.
M- also played lines micheal jackson line wtf..but u had betta punches that hit even though i taught u dont do text..lol i taught u was audio full. V/MM http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120709 Return Fav both http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120709 |
tenken punchs were decent some of the didnt make much since to me cant say punchs are played cause most of them are had good worplay though just need to work on personals being worked in and punchlines hittin harder and that would of been a sick verse
mm pretty good verse overall opener was nice then it fell of for a few lines then picked it back up at the nend made up for the fall off pretty good punchs at then end just work on wording your set up lines better and stay awaay from michael jackson lines good verse though vote mm |
i already hit the poll..lol MM it wont allow me.
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ight this was a lil close
tenken-nice flow and structure but i wasnt really feeling ur punches...u need to come a lil harder...was nice tho not bad at all...up ur vocab also...u'll get waay better i can tell MM-ur flow and structue was good...ur punches was a lil better than tenkens just by a lil..and u get my vote cause punches always wins...didnt see any multies..also up ur vocab....besides that everything is good.. |
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