TENKEN.......
YOUR VERSE WAS FUNNIER..
AND LYRICAL STRONGER....
yo ima "split" ur eyes so you can "four-see" my victory~//
call you "Miss Cleo" coz u "predict" ur own loss, fuck the irony~//

this "nigga" actin like M.jackson, "askin for anyone unda 16"~//
whoops! called u a "nigga" my bad "wigga", sorry bout that "Doug Christie"~//

This kids like a "bean" without the "stalk"~//
ur mom was on my "Jack & Golden eggs" befor you could walk~//

WTF is a SPul anyway, it's not in da Dictionary~//
i got u more "dumbfounded" than the bitch "Drew Carey"~//

speakin of which, ur dictionary is as "thick" as Ally McBeal~//
u got more chance of beating me than "M.J's" "court appeal"~//

Whoa! now that i got this audiences attention~//
i'd like to announce "Miss Cleos" intervention~//

the "excitements" over, its time for the "young Crackafella"~//
to spit lyrics that dont got more "chemistry" than Vinegar and Baking Soda~//
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^^^^NICE,...SHIT.....

uppin 4 votes

good verse spul u knocked him out with
good flows, rhymes and good structure

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spul aight, make ya lines shorter an use metaphors n shit like that. Enhanses the rhyme...

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i liked tenken shit better because his shit was more creative and he took a risk going all out and his punches made me laugh good battle though keep elevating

hmmmmmm lmfao this is a tough one really dawg...i look and i think..

but heres my break down:

tenken you had sick punches i like that michael jackson line that shit was jokez i was feelin' it but the doug christie line kilt it dawg...i wasnt really feelin' dat shit word.....best line :
speakin of which, ur dictionary is as "thick" as Ally McBeal~//
u got more chance of beating me than "M.J's" "court appeal"~//

that was sick lmfao i give htis 31/50

SPUL: ya shit was koo...it was consistant and you had a good flow your opener was alright but it could of been hotter then after that shit heated up...you came harder then TENKEN and i could see you put more emotion into ur shit then he did

best line :
Man, I should have passed. Your rhymes are all wack
You be deliverin’ more shit, than a lil’ kid on e-lax

i gave this a 33/50 this was a fuckin' close battle mayn dayum

Ok.....
Breakdown........
Opener -...tenken was both fillers...no real punch...same wit SPuL so neither...
Punches - SPuL...he had more hard hitting punches....Tenken alot of ur ish as fillers..
Flow - tie...both had hot flow..
Wordplay - Tenken....jus had better wordplay...
Personals - Tenken....SPuL stated himself that he didnt have any personals...
Multi's - SPuL...he jus had some but tenken didnt have any...
Closer - SPuL...he had a punch and Tenken's was wack...

Vote - SPuL because of more hard hitting punches....punches win battles....there ya go simple as that.....

complexty-Tenken your was harder to read
Harder punches-Spul nice hard punches good peronsals
Vocab-Spul nice vocab
Personals-Nice personals(spul)
Sturcture-Both had good structure
Understandable-Soukl was easy to read then Tenken

Tenekn you stuff was hot...Best line was like choppa city said...Very hott..
Spul didnt have a line that was that hott but he did have more hot lines than ya
Nice punches spul...

tenken
structure-8/10
hard punches-7/10
complexity-9/10 very hard to read
understandable-6/10

structure-8/10
hard punches-9/10
complexity-4/10 good thing dont worry..
understandbale-10/10
v/Spul returnt he favor please against Born2kill link-http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121447