aight close battle right here.... both verses werent to good but the one your rhymes are played your first lines everything ation try to mix shit up a lil bit Violation to Va if your the original ive seen better from you yo return da favor

VA takes this

itte thanx keep"Em coming uppin dem votes ill return da honset favor

good battle ya'll....

structure-v-t-va2...the one i couldn't really understand where ya bars stoped at
punchlines-v-t-va2
multi's-v-t-va2
personals-the one he had like wun
enjoyed-v-t-va2....he had da betta battle verse all around and he had alot of multi's so dat made it hotter nahmean...the one ya shit was good u gota fix ya structure a lil bit then you'll be good

my vote- v t va2...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120324
^^^there go my battle rite there can ya'll return da favor

itte thanx ill return da honest favor ittte uppin dem vote

Yo Whats Up// Yo The One Had Dis Good Flowz And Nice Punchlines Dog I Liked Yo Shit//


V-t-a Work On Yo Punchlines Homie// U Had Some Good Ones// But U Wasent Hittin Hard Enough//nice Flowz//and Nic Vocab


Vote=the One

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dis was really a sloppy battle
va2 u came wit some alright shit some tite punches and sum tite vocab
the one yo strucutre was fucked up u had some ite shit but yo structure was fucked up

the one
bestline-only 15 but real thorough thought you herd im not b2k but you will get served

^^ ite line

worsteline-i could stop right there and still pull off a win and if this faggot runs his mouht im gonna pull off his skin


wack^^^

v2

bestline-yo insults suppose to hurt they didn't work,when i spit dez verses itta be tyme 4 you to merk\\

^^ ok

worsteline-its gonna be rain playin out lyrics,so much rain flood of flows da word will hear it\


one-

open-7/10
punches-7/10
personals-7/10
structure-6/10
vocab-7/10
flow-7/10
close-8/10
overall-7.2/10

v2-
open-8//10
punches-7/10
personals-8.2/10
structure-8.7/10
vocab-8/10
flow-8.1/10
close-8/10
overall-8.1/10

winner-v2

itte let me vote
ok
va2
it was hott as hell i agree wit choppa about your structure but nice drop tho
pun 9/10
flow 8/10
str 7/10
voc 9/10
ovall 9/10

ok the one yurr was itte but not all dat good drop to u to
the one
punc 8/10
flow 7/10
stru 8/10
voc 9/10
ovall 8/10
good battle
v/va2