Thanks for the vote cuz

Damn disaster this the closest battle i ever had

Lmfao @ LostChild' .. It Is Is It' ....! Ah Ha...!! - - - Aiight'


Upppppppppppin 4 Votes Ya'll!!!!!!!!!!! Don't Sleep On This Shit!!

Yo Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Dis A Fuckin Close Ass Battle

yo d stop actin like u the illest here..u a bitch fo real....just shut the fuck up and accept that some niggaz spit hotta than u...i give u props fo bein a girl 2 hold it down..but u bein a bitch as girl...quit with it

i'll tell u what...i'm not giving this to LC cuz his shit's on the line, but the homie DID get it. not by much, but he did. me-i gues i'm oldfashioned, i love hearing a good punch line, which neither of ya'll had and big bombs to drop. just flowin. but yall both got down and props to LC for havin his life on it. DP, i honestly do'nt know how u got that battle record, unless they weren't freestyles, lol.
how it broke down-
DP's hot ish
"I Aint Got To Be Thick To Take A Bitch Like You
Plus I Got Gats That Go Click Before They Go Boom"-i liked this cuz it just sounds hardcore, lol.
"Your Sealing Your Doom By Perpetrating This Rap
You Keep Yappin Your Fat Lips Without Sayin Crap" this was pretty hot
but here-You Fell Into My Trap When You Called Reinforcements
Your Friends Are About As Qualified As My Doorman" i like that one
most of the rest is plain rhymes and disses, something called filler that i haven't seen refered to on RB yet, but that's what it is, just filler.

LC's hot shit-
"Look bitch I ain't gone be nice when it comes to my life
I seen yo pictures on my block you couldn't even get fucked twice"- i think u coulda turned the "i seen ur picture on my block" thing into a BOMBass punch, but it's still ok
"You just anotha ho that got a little flow
Only mic you holdin is my dick when you deep throat" this one was pretty tight
"To me you ain't nothing but a wanna be eve
My flow a put you in a familiar place, DOWN ON YOUR KNEES"
"Or a bustdown slut, so girl open up
Only good thing out yo mouth, IS WHEN YOU SPITTIN OUT NUT"
these two above were real dope, and those sealed the deal. DP threw down more lines the the max, and u less than it, and u still came out on top. but still bro, u shoulda threw another in. next time too, do'nt focus so much on that she's a girl, but a rapper and a girl. DP, props, maybe next time ya'll should just take longer.

vote-lostchild
PS-that one guy talking about syllables, iduno what he means, in beats, it's like a dance, and it's only interesting if moves around. not like some two step, over and over, but something that dances around on the beat, both had that shit. (then again i produce beats at home, so i have a library to choose from while i read these)

LostChild had a lot of good punches, but they were nearly all along the same lines. Yep, she's a she, but you gotta vary that shit up. Flow and structure were good. I liked your rhyme. The punchlines were fuckin' funny. Disaster, you came out swinging and hit good.

You Keep Yappin Your Fat Lips Without Sayin Crap
^^^
Liked that a lot.

Overall, I think Disaster gets it, although you were both close on all fronts.

Vote=disaster

this is a hot motha fuckin battle

my shit on the line can we get some more votes

itte im going 4 lost child because his voca was speaking to me,his structure was balanced an his flow came wit punches an dpiece did a great job as well but
v/ lost

return da favore thanx

Somebody End Dis Shit Close Dis Shit// Dis Is One Fuckin Close Battle

yo this is crazy ... for realz jihuoghuo ummmmmmmmmmmmm i dont know

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Damn my rb carear on the line

can we get some more fucking votes

We still need more votes folks

yall niggas vote

Damn come on we still need some more fucking votes

lostchild=good, structure, punches, and had a little good flow the lined i liked the most was-But when I beat her she gone be mad like when her pussy be bleeding. That shit was funny
disater- she got the flow but she dont got the structure and punches she had some punches but they werent good enough

personnally- i think lost child won it was short but he put everything it takes to win
overall my vote is for lostchild


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